Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2016 8:23 pm Title: Chapter 9

Emmetts going back to Hazelhurst.  Not his favorite place in the world, but he'll do it for Brian.    It here we meet Dr. Anders and later learn his connection to Brian's past.  If he'd been able to change the past would Brian be who he is today?  Depends on too many variables.

Justin wonders why he's not as important to Brian as Cynthia and his mother.  No wonder he doubts Brian's devotion.  Little does he know that Brian doubts his. 

Cynthia and Everett dynamics develop in this chapter and get better with each chapter.  We learn that Lara is Everett's daughter.  Working with relatives has to be harder than working with friends.

I'm not sure what's up with Michael and Lindsay.  Lindsay seems almost frantic.  There has got to be more to it than just being a surrogate.  And why is she telling Michael?  It has to be something pretty important to fly all the way to Pittsburgh and meet with him without Mel or Ben.  Something strange this way comes.

The policemen come and Brian has fun.  Until he starts to have an episode.  If Everett thought he could get through to Brian by insulting him, he was wrong.

Author's Response:

Oh My. you gave me five reviews in one day. Holy cow!

Emmett will play a big supportive role in Brian's recovery. Probably because they are more alike than either would like to admit. Who knows what Brian would have grown into had Dr. Anders achieved his goal.

I love writing the Cynthia Everett scenes. Both of them cool as cucumbers until they can't hold back anymore.

Lara too, will play a role in Brian's well being. She is like a jack of all trades within Everett's company. They are still trying to work out their personal dynamics though.

As for Michael and Linds, Something strange is coming.

I love me some Snarky Brian, until he devolves into scary Brian. I dont think anyone could be prepared for that.

Saje