Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2016 6:04 am Title: Chapter 12

"Don't call me Honeycutt." I love how Brian is teasing Emmett with calling him by his last name.

Author's Response:

i think he does it at this point, because Emmett is the only one he knows he can piss off, but not offend. Does that make sense?

Saje

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2016 1:29 pm Title: Chapter 12

Brian Kinney traveling by train.  Two days no less.  Can't imagine the only train I've ridden was the Bullet Train in Japan.  At least they got a hotel before going further.  Two days make a difference in Brian's weight evidently.  He never seemed to take well to mothering.  Maybe because he didn't get any when he was growing up?  Gotta admit that I don't think anyone will think of looking for Brian in Hazelhurst.  lol.  What is it that Justin's planning?  Daphne may have a clue but I don't.  Love how Molly is smart enough to figure out something's wrong.  So Melanie finally gets what Brian means to Lindsay.  I'm not sure I do.  Some part of me still wants to think Lindsay is thinking happy hetro thoughts.  Everett appears to have a photographic memory. Good to have in his line of work.  The trick with the photos means something.  Same thing with Harry and seeing one of Everett's men following someone.  That too means something and I'll have to wait to find out what.  Emmett seemed worried about money.  With $60,000 and an unlimited, untraceable credit card he doesn't need to.  I laugh when I think of everyone high on weed and shopping.  In case I didn't mention it your cop characters are totally interesting, who did you base them on.  I'm thinking they'll play an important part later on?

Author's Response:

I think they took Brian by train, because the bad guys would expect him to use his jet, plus the anonymity of public transpo. Brian has now had a week of incredible stress. From Justin to the hospital, it would stand to reason he would lose some weight. We can hope no one will find him in Hazelhurst. Justin and Daphne have always seemed to share something a little extra, like twins, knowing what the other is thinking. I like Molly too, she is quickly approaching the age Justin was when he met the gang, and she is not exactly a fool either.

Mel and Linds? Can we really ever understand all of the dynamics between them or just hold on for the ride?

Everett has many talents that served him well in his time with the government and we  can only be thankful that those skills have not gotten rusty. He is a good man.

Emmetts concern about money, stems from wanting to stay untraceble, much like Mikey and Hunter when they took off in the series. The agents showed him he had nothing to worry about.

The High Hotel Hooligans was one of my favorite scenes to write.

I did not base my cops on anyone in particular, they are kind of an amalgamation of many tv cops I have liked over the years. And yes, we can hope they will be important later.