Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2016 7:04 pm Title: Chapter 14

Okay I've been meaning to ask you about this thing that Brian can do...he can see people's aura's or something? We all know that he is a master of reading people in general but what is all this talk about the color he sees around people, does this mean he'a an empath?

Author's Response:

I have not really addressed Brian's gift yet. We will get to it soon though. I am glad to see you still hanging in there.

 

Saje

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2016 5:07 pm Title: Chapter 14

Justin and fake Brian fake a fight.  Now what are Justin's plans?  Why does Brian pick this time to give Justin his long-overdue wedding present?  Looks like Molly isn't the only curious one in the family.  Gus is trying to learn more about his dad too.

Mikey and Deb.  Deb is worried about Brian, while Mikey's mind is on why Hunter doesn't want to come home for Thanksgiving.  At least Deb has Jennifer to talk to.  Jenn wants to know what Deb knows about Brian's upbringing.  What will she do with the knowledge.

Lady Jane.  Will she have her hands full, or will Brian?  She's a great character worthy of going up against the Great Brian Kinney. 

You write some great chapters.  It would be hard to remember all the good parts for commenting if I didn't make notes while reading since you switch from one character to another in different paragraphs.  That's why I'm so glad to have a chance to reread this from the beginning.  : )

Author's Response:

I think Brian used his present to show his love and to keep Justin distracted. He knows how smart his lover is.

Molly and Gus should team up.

I don't know if Jen even knows why she needs to know, ya know?

Jane...what can I say about Jane? Uh, never judge a book by its cover?

Thanks for the compliment. The switching is done intentionally, to mimic the series, and in some cases to convey how fast things are happening.