Date: Jun 05, 2016 9:31 pm Title: Chapter 18
I hope Justin won't do anything stupid and that nobody will found out what he discovered.
Author's Response:
Justin tends to be a bit rash and hotheaded. We will see if it has any ramifications this time.
Date: May 11, 2016 9:30 am Title: Chapter 18
Author's Response:
I like the little insights we get into the workings of Brian's brain and thought processes. Thank YOu for saying that! No they did not, and it really was not about the sex/non sex anyway.
Marc is kinda in the middle. He really is just a normal guy dealing with somewhat abnormal situations. He is a little out of his element.
I feel that Brian's initial steps into opening up, in the kitchen, give him a sense of relief and security. Enough of each for him to really start to trust Jane and her unconventional ways.
Justin will be Justin, until he is forced to see situations through someone elses' perspective. Justin is a smart and sneaky fucker when he wants to be.
Bad guys will be bad guys, and we have to assume they are just as resourceful as Brian in order to do the things they have done so far.
What a wonderful sign of respect for Jane! That Brian would think so highly of her as to make her a superhero. I just could not resist the urge. It felt so right, him making a niche for her, a way for her to fit into his "family"
Saje
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This is the response to your review of chapter 18, which I somehow managed to lose.
So very sorry.
Saje
Author's Response:
Again, so sorry I lost your Review. I will try to be more careful next time.