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Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2022 3:30 am Title: Epilogue

Whatever happened to the sequel? Please write it.

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2021 3:51 am Title: Chapter 1

Did you every finish this story line? I mean you left us with a huge mystery. I have noticed that you took a few years off from writing. And I'm hoping with your recent post to "Eye In The Sky", you back wiritting again.  

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2019 8:20 pm Title: Epilogue

oh shit, Ted and Brandon again

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2016 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 9

Interesting POV regarding Brandon's actions.

Happy they had THE talk about tricking and that Brian finally understood Justin's POV.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2016 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 8

Hard times for Brian: dealing with demanding kids while he doesn't want to refuse anything but needs them to be reasonable.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2016 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 6

Yeah, the family is reunited!!!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2016 8:28 pm Title: Chapter 4

Finally some hope on the horizon.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2016 6:45 pm Title: Chapter 2

Nancy is as bitchy as ever!

So glad Brian found out what Justin spent his time on.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2016 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Whoa, what a start!!!

Angst full volume!

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2016 8:41 pm Title: Epilogue

Interesting turn of events but you can't stop now. Will there be a sequel? I really like that story and I want more. Please. 



Author's Response:

Oh wow, I'm so glad you liked it. Yes there will be a sequel. I'm finishing all my WIP stories then I'll start the sequel. Thank you so much for all your reviews. They were so amazing to read.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2016 8:36 pm Title: Chapter 14

Wow, I never even thought about Ted betraying Brian. Will we get to know what caused the fire?



Author's Response:

Yes we will find out what caused the fire. Ted really didn't betray Brian, I wasn't very clear on that. It was an intern at Kinnectik that Brandon had blackmailed. Yes there will be another story to finish everything. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2016 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 13

Everything seems to be falling into place. I like that.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2016 7:47 pm Title: Chapter 11

I'm really glad he went to Brian. I was wondering about that Sabastian thing. Maybe it wasn't Justin?

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2016 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 10

I knew Brandon had some kind of bad thing in his head. I hope Justin has the guts to tell Brian about it. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2016 3:07 pm Title: Chapter 9

Interesting. I wonder if Brandon has some kind of plan. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2016 2:57 pm Title: Chapter 8

Kids say stupid stuff that they don't mean all the time. I think it's good though that Brian told them about his background. It could help them to understand part of his behavior better. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2016 1:29 pm Title: Chapter 7

I can totally understand Justin. He is right to be worried about Joshua.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2016 5:07 am Title: Chapter 6

A great reunion. And Joshua will feel welcome in the family pretty soon. Now they just need to be allowed to keep him.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2016 4:51 am Title: Chapter 5

Yes, they found them. I can't wait for when Brian finds out.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2016 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 4

Yes, they saw the flare. I'm sooo excited now.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2016 9:24 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm so glad Brian isn't giving up on Justin. He just has to find him. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2016 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 2

Brian legally adopted Briana right? So they can't just take her away from him. I'm glad that Joshua is adapting to the situation that quickly.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2016 8:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

I know you said Justin won't die but it's still very hard to read this. But I can't stop until I know he is alright. So I'm off to read more.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2016 12:22 pm Title: Epilogue

Brian and Justin are happy, but now you have to give us the story on what happened with Ted and who the real mole is.



Author's Response:

I know. I did give a hint about the mole. Where Ted says that Brandon blackmailed an intern.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2016 1:32 am Title: Epilogue

I din't see that one-  I hope you are planning on enlightening us ( the poor readers) regarding a real epilogue to the story



Author's Response:

Lol. I could write more of a epilogue but it would be filled with more questions as you are.asking know. But I don't want anyone mad at me so i'll work.on writing more to the epilogue. But the sequel will have the answers and it will be the last in the series.

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