[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2016 1:16 pm Title: First Day at Work
Evil Mikey. I like. Where did he get his little charm and will Brian realize he's been had?
Date: Jun 07, 2016 5:20 pm Title: First Day at Work
It's absolutely not boring; your stories are never boring!
It was a little funny ("made the Road Runner look like an asthmatic slouch") and little hot ("Justin teasing with the ice cream").
I guess there will be more of that later on, so I'm not worried.
I loved Brian with Sap and Vance. No BS, straight to the point.
The last scene is disturbing as Michael is tricking Brian to comply his desires, which could lead to some "eww" things if he got his way. But he can't have that, can he?
The more he thinks he will win, the more crashed he will be.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for telling me what you think. I love reviews like this.
And yes, the last scene was disturbing wasn't it? Don't worry, that was what I was hoping for. Things will turn out all right but look forward to more mind control.
Date: Jun 07, 2016 5:40 am Title: First Day at Work
Nice to read a new chapter on this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much and how did you like it? Anything boring? Was it funny? Did you like that last scene? Did you like the ending? How was it?