Date: Dec 30, 2022 3:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was a great story and I was riveted from start to finish. I loved that the first thing Justin did after that call from Michael, was head home to Pittsburgh and save the day, not to mention Brian as well as Kinnetik!! And Howard Bellweather? Of all the suspects, he wasn't on my list either, so he was a total surprise.
Date: Aug 16, 2020 8:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
did read it again
Date: May 11, 2019 3:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Definitely had me guessing until the end! TAG
Date: Jun 07, 2016 7:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story is so well written; every ingredient so well measured: angst, jealousy, stupidity (of you know who), hot and sensual actions in and out of the shower, mystery, justice (judge Roy down), real friendship and surprise of the bad guy.
Author's Response:
Wow! Coming from you that is a great compliment. You've made my week.
Date: Jun 05, 2016 9:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed that. I would write something more elaborate but I'm really tired because I couldn't stop reading. Thank you for writing.
Author's Response:
I know what you mean. I can't stop reading all the good stories posted either. That you for commenting. ;)
Date: Jun 04, 2016 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
great story= lots of suspense and intrigue and glad Brian was exonerated- sorry that Emmett was hurt but it looks like he made some nice new friends
Author's Response:
Yes, Emmett came out well in this. Two men instead of the usual one of everyone else. LOL.
Date: Jun 04, 2016 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is one of my favorite stories. I like when the angst is there, but NOT between Brian and Justin... I like when they fight the angst that is against the both of them and they are strong and get thru it all together.
LOVED the surprise ending... I never saw that one coming!
Author's Response:
Thanks that is so nice to hear. The ending almost was a surprise to me too. : )
Date: Jun 04, 2016 2:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Howard Bedwetter??? Now that's a surprise... Thanks for my morning fic, it was perfect with my coffee...
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
You know I considered Craig, but I thought who would be the last person you expected. Love the new name -- Howard Bedwett!!! LOL. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for commenting.
Date: Jun 04, 2016 1:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm... Scratches head, now how could it be? Why is my money on Michael? He's always been jealous of Justin, and it would give Brian a reason to need him after his ordeal ended... Or of course Michael and Mel, because those two together is just one ugly nightmare...
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
Michael would have been too easy. Melanie the same reason. How did you like my detectives that Emmett ended up with?
Date: Jun 04, 2016 1:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Because this isn't broken into chapters, I'm going to comment along the way as I read... First Holy Shit! I didn't know it was possible for Michael to be even more of an idiot and an asshole than usual...
I love that Justin came running to rescue Brian, and their love seems strong even with the distance that has grown between them. Ted is great and supportive as always, and of course I'm disappointed in Deb, Ben and Michael.
Why do I have a feeling that Mel is behind all of this??? Just Saying...
Brian would never hurt Emmett, I mean never... And what's up with all the memory loss? Did Brian get hit in the head with the bat too??? Okay of to continue reading...
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
I'm sorry about not posting each chapter seperately, but this makes it one long chapter. lol. I love making Michael the bad guy. You are correct Brian would never hurt Emmett. Memories of Justin lying on concrete got too much for Brian and he just shut down. Thanks for leaving a comment. : )