Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2018 8:49 am Title: ~Part III: WHO'S YOUR DADDY NOW?~

The look of an angel with the lust of a devil. I don't think I will ever get that definition of Justin out of my head.

So Michael keep the sheets *shudders*... I'm thinking Ben is going to be doing that housecleaning pretty soon. I hope Ted set Ben straight regarding the lack of time spent between Michael and Brian. I hope when Debbie hears all about Michael's stupidity and foolishness, she will stand her guns and not coddle Michael. We all know how easy it is for her to play Mother Hen to her baby.

Craig... scum of a father. All he had to do was BE a Father, and he wouldn't be in  the situation he is with his business. But if him and Marlene think they can corner Justin and have him cowering to them, they better remember Brian is right there. Besides, Justin has a restraining order, and they can also bring their attention to Chartrez'. Glad Justin told Craig just how unimportant he was to him. And Brian threatening him was classic.

Lindsay. God that she-devil!  I can't wait to see what her incidentals were. If she was using Gus' college fund for the PI, the incidental money had to have gone somewhere else. If she escapes jail time, she's going to be paying back Brian for a long time to come. I wonder if she has a secret bank account?  And she called herself Brian's WIFE? I'm surprised Brian didn't throw up at that moment. Or at least start gagging! I knew Brian was going to be incensed about Sam's treatment of Gus. And with the way Gus is terrified of having to go with Lindsay, things must be a lot worse than we thought. If Lindsay knew what was good for her, she's get Sam to take her FAR away!

Justin is so funny. Described Michael to a tee. I loved his response to Emmett's take of the bed scene. And the way he talked to Lindsay, well let's just say I found it quite humorous. And I loved Gus hugging Justin. Yep, Mr Kinney, you are done for.

I sure hope Mel gets there soon. Will she know to go to the Resort? Glad she plans to move back to Pittsburgh. And, if she can't afford it, we know Brian will willingly help. No Charge!

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: Cemegh Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2016 7:43 pm Title: ~Part III: WHO'S YOUR DADDY NOW?~

I'm so happy to see this fic updated. I read the first two chapters on MW and I really loved the Brian/Justin dynamic. Their personalities are so distinct but equal in this fic. 

I must also admit that I'm a sucker for anti lindsey and anti michael fics, but all too often they don't fully get what's coming to them for the sake of peace within the family. I must be a vindictive b$tch because I thoroughly enjoy them getting their just desserts:-) 

Looking forward to the next update.

Kearney

Author's Response:

LOL! Kearney, trust you me, we are cut from the same vindictive cloth!! I often feel that at some point we are made to feel bad for our inherent dislike of these two. I make it a point to make them pay one way or in five-hundred others, LOL. And I agree with you that they are almost alwaysexcused for the sake of peace in the family. The way this fic is shaping up, there shall be none of that!! 

Thank you so much for continuing to follow this story!!

Happy reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2016 8:07 am Title: ~Part III: WHO'S YOUR DADDY NOW?~

First of all, since when is a 6k word chapter considered short? Lol. Nice confrontation with Craig. Now, what's up with Molly? Hmmm. TAG

Author's Response: LOL! I should have said 'Short for me' in reference to the 6K chapter... Jeeze I'm still surprised by the word count! Molly will be making an appearance very soon. Happy Reading and HUGS, ~Nichelle

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2016 6:11 pm Title: ~Part III: WHO'S YOUR DADDY NOW?~

Beyond excited to see you over here at KD. I'm not sure what happened over at MW, but there seems to be a bit of a migration............huh.

Anyway........Great chapter!! I don't know where to begin! There's salways so many details involved in your fics. And I love that they are so long adn involved! It makes reading them such a joy! 

As always, your group of "villians" are spot on as to how I see them, or how I want to see them. :) I've always seen Craig as one of the worst. Any parent who turns their backs on their children is beyond evil! It's all in how we see the world and want our kids to see the world I guess. Funny....my daughter (20) was watching a movie on Netflix the other day called Jennifer's wedding. Apparently 2 women are getting married and surprise their families. Not sure, haven'twatched it. But my daughter came into teh kitchen where I was and told me she was watching this film. she was wondering why kids found it so hard to tell their kids they were gay. why wouldn't their parents understand or turn away from them? She said, "I guess it's all in how we're raised. I don't see the difference between saying 'Mom this is my boyfriend or Mom, this is my girlfriend'"  Needless to say I had a very proud mamma moment! :) I've done OK I guess.

Anyway............I digress. Sorry. showdown with Craig was brilliiant! We all know he's going to keep trying, but I really enjoy watching him get cut down! Especially in public! LOL!

Lindsey is completely dillusional! His wife?!?! Indeed................I don't think so!! I guess if you tell yourself something for long enough you begin to actually believe it. Hopefully Mel will arrive soon and be able to give Brian what he needs!! Namely his parental rights. Also that Harry and Ava will be able to stop Lindsey's macinations legally as well. Not just stop, but to make her accountable. Takign $ from gus's collge funds for one thing. I also hope that Mel will be able to fill us in on what the "incidentles" $ is for. sounds like that could be intriguing.

Curious as to what deb's reaction is going to be once Em tells her what's really happening with her beloved Micheal. will she finally let go of those apron strings or will she continue making excuses for hom. 

Again....thank you for this! I've needed an update of some kind!! :)

Author's Response:

Hello My Dear Sweet Elaine!!! I'm so happy to see you here on KD! Although I've met some wonderful readers and author friends on MW, and I will always be grateful for the work they have done in keeping the QAF fandom alive thus far, it was time for me to spread my wings. My stories will stay there but all of my complete work and updates to those stories still being written will be HERE.

Craig is definitely one of those characters I absolutely LOVE to HATE!! I have a pet peeve with parents who try to live vicariously through their children. Many of my friends in RL have had issues with their parents dreaming BIG for them and then when they fall short of their parental dream, the child or in this case the young adult suffered an identity crisis of some sort or in the worst case, a mental breakdown. It broke my heart to see them like that! Thankfully, they learned the gift of detaching themselves with love and going on to live their own lives in spite of their parents' wishes for them. Some of them even included being gay and living their truth. I think that's why Brian and Justin's stories- in particular- resonated with me the most. They showed the world that there were different types of abuse stemming from parents and all of it leaves bruising and scar tissue; some seen, some underneath but all of it felt in one way or another.

You are right about Lindsay!!! She is metaphorically delusional. But this is ONE fic that won't have her sick in the head but, more or less sick, in the heart. I LOVE holding Michael and Lindsay responsible for their actions the way CowLip NEVER did. Be it in AU or within Canon, those two will be facing the consequences of their actions within my work. Somehow, although I always believed that Mel should have been able to form her own opinions about Brian, I also thought she was just a victim of circumstance. Brian wouldn't have been able to push her buttons so much if Lindsay wasn't behind the scenes pulling her strings. She will definitely have some insight on Lindsay's 'incidental' spending.

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2016 9:40 am Title: ~Part III: WHO'S YOUR DADDY NOW?~

I love this story; so glad you posted a new chapter!!!

I loved "The look of an angel with the lust of a devil"; so very true.

I loved the way Brian defended Justin attacked by his father and the way Justin clashed Lindsay.

This is teasing our appetite for more...

Author's Response:

Hey Claire,

First, THANK YOU, for coming over to the new site to read the continuation of this and my other stories. Your support means more to me than you will ever know!

Now for your review: I've always felt that Brian and Justin were kindred souls and that their personalities complimented each other. I try to show that in everything that I write. They are both fierce protectors in their own rights. Whereas Brian can be physical at times, Justin can be just as effective with scathing remarks. They are both also too intelligent for the other one to fool easily. I LOVE writing them! It will be interesting to see what other developments happen throughout 'the week' LOL *evil grinning and rubbing hands*

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle