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Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2018 6:06 pm Title: ~Part IV: MIDDLE GROUND~

You Go Molly! Does Joel know all about Molly's family? Does he know what Marlene tried to do to her? And who is Marlene to call Molly a whore? Isn't that Marlene's title?  Well, I think Marlene just got her and Craig checked out of Chartrez Resort. Craig can thank her by reacting the same as Molly, for all I care. I'm thinking Molly might have a restraining order against Marlene, so can she claim to have been protecting herself?  Maybe Marlene will go to jail for breaking the restraining order, but would Craig bail her out? Even if Molly gets charges pressed against her, Harry won't allow anything to stick. And there's plenty of money backing her, along with family.

Michael, Michael, Michael! Did I understand that correctly, that Ben has been giving the rent money TO Michael, and instead of paying the stores rent, he was sending it to Lindsay? If he's a few months behind, can't the owner have the locks changed and keep his store merchandise, which includes the collectibles? Did Ben get a notice in the mail pertaining to the closure of the store, and that's how he found out?  That still doesn't count for the fact that Brian was sending extra money to Lindsay, plus she was siphoning from Gus' college fund, JUST WHERE IS LINDSAY SPENDING ALL THAT MONEY? PI's can cost up to $100 per hour. Just how often was the PI ghosting Brian?

I hope Craig doesn't try to get Michael and Lindsay involved in his conspiracies. Or will they try to involve Craig? Poor Brian... has already been through the ringer at the of them, but I'm sure we're only scratching the future.

This story is so good. thanks, Nichelle.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: Shirley Heath Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2016 10:54 pm Title: ~Part IV: MIDDLE GROUND~

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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2016 6:38 pm Title: ~Part IV: MIDDLE GROUND~

Interesting plots coming right up on many fronts. Molly seems to share some great interest in tall man's midsections with her brother... It reminds me of the visit to the shrink/psychologist in S1 and Justin talking about dicks... The look of Jennifer and the doc! Too much fun.

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2016 12:21 am Title: ~Part IV: MIDDLE GROUND~

Chelle...Chelle... Chelle, girl you left the gate wide open here. I am so glad Molly cold-cocked that Wench, she had it coming after what she put that girl through.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2016 5:11 pm Title: ~Part IV: MIDDLE GROUND~

Oh boy.  Surprise, surprise.  It's nice that Molly is happily married and soon to be a mother, but even better love, love, love her taking on Marlene like she did.  I'm sure Brian and Justin will back her up in any trouble she might get into for it.  Not to mention Aunt Prissy and Uncle Peter.  Maybe Marlene will finally end up in jail?  Good to see that Ted has Brian's back.  Not surprised to find Mikey spending money that he doesn't have to get the goods on Brian.  That friendship was long overdue for ending.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2016 5:03 pm Title: ~Part IV: MIDDLE GROUND~

Man...I so needed this! I read this last night and it was a lovely revrieve from teh harsh light of reality. thank you. 

Terrific intor to Molly. Your discriptions always allow me to really visualize all teh characters. Becuase we all have no idea what Molly would really look like as an adult, I can almost see her as a modern day Marlena Dietrich or some such. Apparently however, with a much better right hook! lol.

that my dear was brilliant! Loved loved loved the ending. Gave me a great laugh whcih was needed. Even seeing it again. I can look up a bit as I write this and smirk a bit. just imagining it.

Looking forward to her backstory. Understand what's been going on in her life. I get the impression she's going to be an integral part of this story. 

thanks once again for sharing this. Always brilliant. 

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2016 5:35 am Title: ~Part IV: MIDDLE GROUND~

Feisty! Like her brother; good to read this new development. The plot is thicking.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2016 2:47 am Title: ~Part IV: MIDDLE GROUND~

I think this story is slowly starting to become a favorite of mine, Molly punching Marlene had me smiling I can't wait to get the rest of her story and to find out more about Michael and Lindsay.

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