Date: Oct 05, 2018 1:12 am Title: ~Part V: TANGLED WEBS~
Craig is the most profoundly immoral and malevolent person on this planet! To plan to sell his daughter and confiscate her inheritance! God! Is there a proper word to describe him? I don't think I can come up with one to suit him. Are Justin and Molly aware of their inheritance? If that was the case, Justin wouldn't have needed to make a deal with Brian about college tuition. And if they aren't aware of it, why not?
What ever is wrong with Lindsay? the brunette had spent almost an hour licking and stroking her to no avail. Does she have Pelvic Inflammatory Disease? Whatever it is, not feeling sorry for her. Just glad she passed out before Debbie bought her deceitful lies. Debbie better bite her tongue when it comes to Melanie, until she has all the facts. The family is not going to take too kindly to her berating Melanie.
LEDA! You Go Brian! And YES! Melanie and Jenny are staying with Brian and Justin.
XOXO ~ Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2016 2:07 am Title: ~Part V: TANGLED WEBS~
Definitely a VERY tangled web. Thanks for the update. TAG
Date: Jul 18, 2016 4:15 pm Title: ~Part V: TANGLED WEBS~
Hi Nichelle!! another great update for a fantastic fic.
what a shocker to have Leda there!! Brian is definitely a step ahead of everyone and seems to be looking out for their best interests, including Mel as it appears. I think Brian knows that Leda is a much better option for Mel than Lindsey.
goodness....what's wrong with Lindsey? I'll be honest...I'm, not so sure I'm all that concerned about her. LOL. I'm more concerned about Gus and everyone else's reaction to her being ill. will seh get better? will she use what ever it is to manipulte those around her? Please don't have Brian feel guilty or responsible for her and have her stay at the mansion!!
OK...so I know you have Craig...but HOLY SHITBALLS!! He is one evil, and I mean super evil asshole! He is one sick bastard! Definitely want to read how you bring him down in this one! Love how you do it in the others.
Molly rocks! Great pow to teh kisser adn well deserved.
so much happens in every chapter in all your stories. I love it. Love being able to sit down and really get into each chapter. I've said it before, you have a gift.
Excited fo rthe next one!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jul 17, 2016 2:20 am Title: ~Part V: TANGLED WEBS~
Love me some Leda! You go girl!
Can't stand Lindsay here! She really needs to get a clue.
Loving Molly!
Date: Jul 16, 2016 4:27 pm Title: ~Part V: TANGLED WEBS~
So, Craig intends to "sell" Molly to cover his debts: he's worse than I imagine.
The dance between Brain and Justin might add some heat to the evening.
Leda welcoming Mel: this might add some heat too...
Can't wait for more...
Date: Jul 16, 2016 2:25 pm Title: ~Part V: TANGLED WEBS~
You are killing me here....but in the best way. Craig and Marlene are low down, scum of the earth cowards. What the hell is wrong with them? Don't they realize that because Molly is married they can't make her do anything? It's a good thing that Justin has a failsafe in place though. As for Lindsay....she should have taken care of her medical problems before they got too bad and hopefully she doesn't suffer the ultimate consequence because of her negligence.
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2016 12:08 pm Title: ~Part V: TANGLED WEBS~
Wow. You've given us a lot here to enjoy. A new chapter with Craig and his bitch being put in their place and Lindsay in the hospital would be terrific.
Date: Jul 16, 2016 10:05 am Title: ~Part V: TANGLED WEBS~
Thank you,I love this story. I updated and have anther waiting for edits just because I rad this. I can't wait to see what you are going to do to Michael and Lindsay. I really love this Deb, she isn't going to listen to anymore from these two. Can't wait to see where you go next.
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