Date: Sep 30, 2018 12:17 am Title: PART VI: THIN LINES...
Cold shower time. That, My Dear, was the HOTTEST sex scene I have ever read. WOWZA! Brian's efforts towards making Justin's first time bottoming special, really paid off. I think he officially born the newest bottom boy, well as far as it is Brian on top.
I loved the speech Brian gave to Thunder-Cunt Lindsay. If that's what he said to her in the past, how does she expect him to accept her now?
I can't see why Mel is any kind of concerned about Michael's threat to get custody of Jenny. What kind of job does he have? I'm sure he's homeless by now. He hasn't supported Jenny other than a few dollars here and there, but can pay out $300 monthly for a PI to keep tabs on Brian? No judge in his right mind would allow someone like that custody.
Very good chapter...
XOXO ~ Cathy
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2017 10:59 pm Title: PART VI: THIN LINES...
Very nice . . . Probably shouldn't be reading smut like this at work though. Lol. TAG
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2016 2:19 am Title: PART VI: THIN LINES...
HOT! But also, the fact that Justin trusted Brian enough to bottom for him was so lovely.
[Report This]Date: Aug 31, 2016 4:57 am Title: PART VI: THIN LINES...
Melanie, with the help of Leda is seeing a new side of Brian. Justin and Brian's faux relationship is turning into something else.
Date: Aug 30, 2016 7:10 pm Title: PART VI: THIN LINES...
Oh boy, what a chapter!!!!!
It was so worth the wait ;-))
The beginning is playful with a little serious stuff (cancer, work, family) between Mel and Leda. As soon as Brian and Justin arrive, the ton becomes friendly and gently mocking. I really love the new dynamic between Mel and Brian.
As for the last part, you spoiled us with a loooooooooong and super hot scene.
To make it better, there are 2 chapters to read.
Thank you so much!
Date: Aug 30, 2016 6:12 pm Title: PART VI: THIN LINES...
Thunder-Cunt! Love it! You come up wiht the greatest expressions, both in your sotries adn your reviews (which I read thoroughly as well as they are all highly entertaining!!) Oh she is going to get her own soon and I can't wait to see what you have in sstore for her. Knowing you there will much angst leading up to it and it will be a joy to read!! Her level of selfishness and her sense of entitlement is astounding. It's hard to believe ethat there are actually people out there who really do act like that in RL and not just in fictional stories.
REally glad to see Leda in the mix here. she'' be a big help in keeping Mel grounded and hopefully happy at some point. She's very level headed and will be able to help Mel think logically when it comes to Lindsey and Michael. She's a breath of fresh air really for Mel. I also love how she's so loyal to Brian. she'll really help Mel reallign her htinking when it comes to him as ell. Get her to stop the automatic caustic comments, especially around the kids.
The scene between B&J was incredible!!!!!!! I mean sizzling, and so lovely at teh same time! Quite often I just gloss over sex scenes when I read fics, especially when the happen all the time. this was ......guh! well, needless to way I read it thoroughly!! (twice) So gald that Justin bottomed for Brian. That he gave him that measure of trust.
Brilliant chapter!! Off to reead the next one.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Aug 30, 2016 3:48 am Title: PART VI: THIN LINES...
Chelle,
Love the HOT sex. Brian definitely made Justin's first time special.
<3
~Lorie