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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2016 12:08 pm Title: ~Part V: TANGLED WEBS~

Wow.  You've given us a lot here to enjoy.  A new chapter with Craig and his bitch being put in their place and Lindsay in the hospital would be terrific. 

Reviewer: starlight Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2016 10:05 am Title: ~Part V: TANGLED WEBS~

Thank you,I love this story. I updated and have anther waiting for edits just because I rad this. I can't wait to see what you are going to do to Michael  and Lindsay.  I really love this Deb, she isn't going to listen to anymore from these two. Can't wait to see where you go next.

star

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2016 6:38 pm Title: ~Part IV: MIDDLE GROUND~

Interesting plots coming right up on many fronts. Molly seems to share some great interest in tall man's midsections with her brother... It reminds me of the visit to the shrink/psychologist in S1 and Justin talking about dicks... The look of Jennifer and the doc! Too much fun.

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2016 12:21 am Title: ~Part IV: MIDDLE GROUND~

Chelle...Chelle... Chelle, girl you left the gate wide open here. I am so glad Molly cold-cocked that Wench, she had it coming after what she put that girl through.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2016 5:11 pm Title: ~Part IV: MIDDLE GROUND~

Oh boy.  Surprise, surprise.  It's nice that Molly is happily married and soon to be a mother, but even better love, love, love her taking on Marlene like she did.  I'm sure Brian and Justin will back her up in any trouble she might get into for it.  Not to mention Aunt Prissy and Uncle Peter.  Maybe Marlene will finally end up in jail?  Good to see that Ted has Brian's back.  Not surprised to find Mikey spending money that he doesn't have to get the goods on Brian.  That friendship was long overdue for ending.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2016 5:03 pm Title: ~Part IV: MIDDLE GROUND~

Man...I so needed this! I read this last night and it was a lovely revrieve from teh harsh light of reality. thank you. 

Terrific intor to Molly. Your discriptions always allow me to really visualize all teh characters. Becuase we all have no idea what Molly would really look like as an adult, I can almost see her as a modern day Marlena Dietrich or some such. Apparently however, with a much better right hook! lol.

that my dear was brilliant! Loved loved loved the ending. Gave me a great laugh whcih was needed. Even seeing it again. I can look up a bit as I write this and smirk a bit. just imagining it.

Looking forward to her backstory. Understand what's been going on in her life. I get the impression she's going to be an integral part of this story. 

thanks once again for sharing this. Always brilliant. 

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2016 5:35 am Title: ~Part IV: MIDDLE GROUND~

Feisty! Like her brother; good to read this new development. The plot is thicking.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2016 2:47 am Title: ~Part IV: MIDDLE GROUND~

I think this story is slowly starting to become a favorite of mine, Molly punching Marlene had me smiling I can't wait to get the rest of her story and to find out more about Michael and Lindsay.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2016 1:50 am Title: ~Part I: LIONS AMONG MERE MORTALS~

I just love a good Anti-Michael, Anti-Lindsay story especially when they get what they deserve, so far I am loving this story and I can't wait to find out what happens next, I especially can't wait for Craig to get his too, looking forward to finding out what is going on with Molly, want to know what help Mel has to offer so Brian can get custody of his son.



Author's Response:

So glad that you are enjoying this Blue!!! More coming SOON!! 

Happy Reading and HUGS, 

~Nichelle

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2016 10:36 pm Title: ~Part III: WHO'S YOUR DADDY NOW?~

Oh Chelle.....you must give us more soon dear. I LOVED this chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm definitely working on it. I think I'm officially back on track with all my other WIPs (YAY!!!!) so the update for this should be forthcoming the early part of next week at the latest!! 

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Chelle

Reviewer: Cemegh Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2016 7:43 pm Title: ~Part III: WHO'S YOUR DADDY NOW?~

I'm so happy to see this fic updated. I read the first two chapters on MW and I really loved the Brian/Justin dynamic. Their personalities are so distinct but equal in this fic. 

I must also admit that I'm a sucker for anti lindsey and anti michael fics, but all too often they don't fully get what's coming to them for the sake of peace within the family. I must be a vindictive b$tch because I thoroughly enjoy them getting their just desserts:-) 

Looking forward to the next update.

Kearney



Author's Response:

LOL! Kearney, trust you me, we are cut from the same vindictive cloth!! I often feel that at some point we are made to feel bad for our inherent dislike of these two. I make it a point to make them pay one way or in five-hundred others, LOL. And I agree with you that they are almost alwaysexcused for the sake of peace in the family. The way this fic is shaping up, there shall be none of that!! 

Thank you so much for continuing to follow this story!!

Happy reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: nickknack Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2016 9:07 am Title: ~Part III: WHO'S YOUR DADDY NOW?~

Excellent update. I can't quite work out exactly how Lindsay expects to get away with all she has done and is doing - I guess we don't yet know the true extent of it. Can't wait for more of this very interesting AU.



Author's Response: Hey Nicky! Lindsay, like Michael, expects that Brian will excuse and/or cover all of her faults and sins like he has always done. It doesn't help that Melanie has also covered or excused Lindsay over the years. So Ms. Lindz will be in for quite a rude awakening when all is said and done. Happy Reading and HUGS, ~Nichelle

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2016 8:07 am Title: ~Part III: WHO'S YOUR DADDY NOW?~

First of all, since when is a 6k word chapter considered short? Lol. Nice confrontation with Craig. Now, what's up with Molly? Hmmm. TAG



Author's Response: LOL! I should have said 'Short for me' in reference to the 6K chapter... Jeeze I'm still surprised by the word count! Molly will be making an appearance very soon. Happy Reading and HUGS, ~Nichelle

Reviewer: star Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2016 5:19 am Title: ~Part III: WHO'S YOUR DADDY NOW?~

Yeahhhhhh, thanks for making my day.  I loved it that Craig was put in his place.  Any story you update makes me do my happy dance.



Author's Response: Oh thank you so much Star!! There is so much more to come. Craig isn't nearly through trying to make trouble for Justin. But he will have to go through Brian and he's definitely not ready for that. Happy Reading, ~Nichelle

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2016 6:11 pm Title: ~Part III: WHO'S YOUR DADDY NOW?~

Beyond excited to see you over here at KD. I'm not sure what happened over at MW, but there seems to be a bit of a migration............huh.

Anyway........Great chapter!! I don't know where to begin! There's salways so many details involved in your fics. And I love that they are so long adn involved! It makes reading them such a joy! 

As always, your group of "villians" are spot on as to how I see them, or how I want to see them. :) I've always seen Craig as one of the worst. Any parent who turns their backs on their children is beyond evil! It's all in how we see the world and want our kids to see the world I guess. Funny....my daughter (20) was watching a movie on Netflix the other day called Jennifer's wedding. Apparently 2 women are getting married and surprise their families. Not sure, haven'twatched it. But my daughter came into teh kitchen where I was and told me she was watching this film. she was wondering why kids found it so hard to tell their kids they were gay. why wouldn't their parents understand or turn away from them? She said, "I guess it's all in how we're raised. I don't see the difference between saying 'Mom this is my boyfriend or Mom, this is my girlfriend'"  Needless to say I had a very proud mamma moment! :) I've done OK I guess.

Anyway............I digress. Sorry. showdown with Craig was brilliiant! We all know he's going to keep trying, but I really enjoy watching him get cut down! Especially in public! LOL!

Lindsey is completely dillusional! His wife?!?! Indeed................I don't think so!! I guess if you tell yourself something for long enough you begin to actually believe it. Hopefully Mel will arrive soon and be able to give Brian what he needs!! Namely his parental rights. Also that Harry and Ava will be able to stop Lindsey's macinations legally as well. Not just stop, but to make her accountable. Takign $ from gus's collge funds for one thing. I also hope that Mel will be able to fill us in on what the "incidentles" $ is for. sounds like that could be intriguing.

Curious as to what deb's reaction is going to be once Em tells her what's really happening with her beloved Micheal. will she finally let go of those apron strings or will she continue making excuses for hom. 

Again....thank you for this! I've needed an update of some kind!! :)



Author's Response:

Hello My Dear Sweet Elaine!!! I'm so happy to see you here on KD! Although I've met some wonderful readers and author friends on MW, and I will always be grateful for the work they have done in keeping the QAF fandom alive thus far, it was time for me to spread my wings. My stories will stay there but all of my complete work and updates to those stories still being written will be HERE.

Craig is definitely one of those characters I absolutely LOVE to HATE!! I have a pet peeve with parents who try to live vicariously through their children. Many of my friends in RL have had issues with their parents dreaming BIG for them and then when they fall short of their parental dream, the child or in this case the young adult suffered an identity crisis of some sort or in the worst case, a mental breakdown. It broke my heart to see them like that! Thankfully, they learned the gift of detaching themselves with love and going on to live their own lives in spite of their parents' wishes for them. Some of them even included being gay and living their truth. I think that's why Brian and Justin's stories- in particular- resonated with me the most. They showed the world that there were different types of abuse stemming from parents and all of it leaves bruising and scar tissue; some seen, some underneath but all of it felt in one way or another.

You are right about Lindsay!!! She is metaphorically delusional. But this is ONE fic that won't have her sick in the head but, more or less sick, in the heart. I LOVE holding Michael and Lindsay responsible for their actions the way CowLip NEVER did. Be it in AU or within Canon, those two will be facing the consequences of their actions within my work. Somehow, although I always believed that Mel should have been able to form her own opinions about Brian, I also thought she was just a victim of circumstance. Brian wouldn't have been able to push her buttons so much if Lindsay wasn't behind the scenes pulling her strings. She will definitely have some insight on Lindsay's 'incidental' spending.

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2016 4:58 pm Title: ~Part III: WHO'S YOUR DADDY NOW?~

Chelle,

I love this story. Brian and Justin are so in tune with each other.

Love Justin reaction at finding out about Michael's 'adventure' in Brian's bed.

And the fact that they are both in 'protection mode' when it comes to someone attacking the other is perfect.

Justin on the phone with Lindsay was perfect.

Can't wait for more.

<3 Lorie



Author's Response:

Hello Lorie Darling!!!!! 

I am so excited to be posting the remainder of this story here! It's wonderful to have your muse fed by such a wonderful, stress and drama free enviroment. 

That said, I LOVED your review! Justin is as incorrigible as ever and he holds nothing back. I can't lie; I was laughing too when Emmett was describing Michael's 'adventure.' And Justin was absolutely correct in saying that Brian would have laughed too if it had happened to Em or Ted. I love the dynamic developing between all four men. I love when Brian and Justin get into their respective 'protective' modes. Be it physical, mental, emotional or verbal the two of them can match wits with anybody and they don't hesitate to do so. There is another 'Clash of the WASPs' in the very near future as well as the 'Best Friend vs. Boyfriend' scenario. LOL I can't wait!! 


Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Chelle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2016 9:40 am Title: ~Part III: WHO'S YOUR DADDY NOW?~

I love this story; so glad you posted a new chapter!!!

I loved "The look of an angel with the lust of a devil"; so very true.

I loved the way Brian defended Justin attacked by his father and the way Justin clashed Lindsay.

This is teasing our appetite for more...



Author's Response:

Hey Claire,

First, THANK YOU, for coming over to the new site to read the continuation of this and my other stories. Your support means more to me than you will ever know!

Now for your review: I've always felt that Brian and Justin were kindred souls and that their personalities complimented each other. I try to show that in everything that I write. They are both fierce protectors in their own rights. Whereas Brian can be physical at times, Justin can be just as effective with scathing remarks. They are both also too intelligent for the other one to fool easily. I LOVE writing them! It will be interesting to see what other developments happen throughout 'the week' LOL *evil grinning and rubbing hands*


Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2016 5:59 am Title: ~Part III: WHO'S YOUR DADDY NOW?~

Love, love, love this.  From the Emmett, Ted and Gus parts.  To the Justin vs Craig parts.  To the phonecall between Justin and Lindsay.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

So glad that you are enjoying the workings of my mind, YumYum! I think sometimes we all tend to forget that Gus is a KINNEY and therefore apt to be just as forthright, demanding and tenacious as his father is. It gives me great pleasure to show that side of his personality. Ted and Em crack me up! I love writing their interactions with Brian. They don't let him get away with anything. Craig isn't ready to square off with Justin but it won't stop him from trying...smh All he can see is Justin as the scared little boy who was once under his thumb; not the man that he has become. He's in for a very rude awakening and now that Justin is firmly attached to Brian, Craig (and Marlene- let's not forget her) will have a lot more than he bargained for. The clash of the WASPs (Justin and Lindsay) is just beginning. And Michael's tail hasn't been tucked firmly between his legs...yet.


Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: nickknack Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2016 11:46 am Title: ~Part I: LIONS AMONG MERE MORTALS~

You have me hooked already.  I can't wait to see where this story goes. There is something so satisfying about reading anything to do with Lindsay's and Michael's downfalls, and I love supportive Ted and Emmett:-)



Author's Response:

I've always said that Ted and Emmett would have made excellent 'voices of reason' for Brian as adults than Michael or Lindsay ever could have. The latter two were too busy remembering Brian 'when' instead of allowing him to grow and change into his own definition of who Brian Kinney is. Ted and Em, given the chance, would have allowed for that. Plus, Michael and Lindsay got away with too much crap and was never called on it so I feel that its my duty to make them pay over....and over....and over, LOL you get the point! 

Thanks for making the move with me over to the new site Nicky! 

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2016 6:20 am Title: ~Part II: YOUR STUDLINESS~

Gotta love this.  Please find time to write more on this.  Please, please, please!



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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2016 5:32 am Title: ~Part I: LIONS AMONG MERE MORTALS~

I'm so happy to get to reread this.  I remember wondering what was happening with Molly.  Love your take on Lindsay and Mikey and need more!!!



Author's Response:

More is definitely on the way!! Thank you for making the move with me to the new site! I'm so excited! Molly will make an appearance soon in the most unlikely of places.

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Chelle

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2016 2:09 am Title: ~Part II: YOUR STUDLINESS~

Good thing for those Anti-Michael and Anti-Lindz tags! Lol. What a pair . . . TAG



Author's Response:

LOL! Between this one and The Anti-Couple, they are at their worst...well so far!! Maybe I should give them the monikers of Mischief and Mayhem, LOL Stay Tuned!!

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2016 1:54 am Title: ~Part I: LIONS AMONG MERE MORTALS~

Excellent start with a very intriguing story premise. Although, at 17k words it's more like a start and a half! ;)  Very excited to see more of these characters. I like the slightly softer, but still-Briany, Brian and the bolder Justin. Moving on to chapter 2. TAG



Author's Response:

Hey Tag!!! I'm so freaking excited that you are reading this, too!! I love writing Brian and Justin in many different ways. They were such multi-faceted characters that each story brings out something new, whether it's AU or Canon-esque. I can't thank you, and everyone else, for their constant and nurturing support of my work.

Happy Reading Writing and HUGS,

~Chelle

 

Reviewer: star Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2016 3:34 am Title: ~Part I: LIONS AMONG MERE MORTALS~

I think I have read this 4 or 5 times love it.  



Author's Response:

Thank you so MUCH, Star!!! I'm working on Chapter 3. It's time to get back in the groove of WRITING. Yay! I'm so excited!!! Thank you so much for sticking with me. It means more than I can ever say!

Happy Reading and HUGS, 

~Nichelle

Reviewer: Saje Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2016 9:04 pm Title: ~Part I: LIONS AMONG MERE MORTALS~

I am hooked already! Way to go!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Saje!! I can't wait to start writing more on this!! 

 

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