Date: Jun 15, 2016 1:58 am Title: Chapter 5 - Honey.
All caught up and boy am I loving this! Keep up the excellent work. I'll drop in when I can ;)
Date: Jun 13, 2016 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Island In The Sun.
Ok. Now I want beignets, and to have them fed to me the same way!!!!
Author's Response:
Made me hungry too!
Saje
Date: Jun 10, 2016 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Honey.
I need to play a good game of naughty hangman now!!!!
Date: Jun 10, 2016 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Honey.
Good vibes sent over the ocean; hope you get them for the week-end.
I loved "a puddle of melted goo" and also the rest of this chapter.
I was sure Brian would lose. My bad...
Summer activities:
windsurfing board (could be fun to have Justin trying to teach Brian how to stay on the board and also to have Brian fall repeatedly in the water)
kayak or jet ski to discover the coast of the island
sand-yachting to enjoy the long beaches, the wind and the sun
yachting to spend quality time away from the mass
Date: Jun 09, 2016 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Island In The Sun.
Poor Brian...he really needs those damn clams lol
That Justin...what a giver! He made everything alright for Brian again...nice!
Love the foodplay and of course a threesome is in order or maybe 4!
Date: Jun 09, 2016 9:03 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Island In The Sun.
Yeah! Another chapter. Happy us! Thank you!
Coockie is on fire from morning to night.
More foodplay for now, the ankle is certainly still sore and Brian won't be able to keep up with 2 guys if he can't stand/move.
Date: Jun 09, 2016 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Island In The Sun.
Ok. Now I want beignets, and to have them fed to me the same way!!!!
Author's Response:
We do too!
T & S
Date: Jun 09, 2016 8:50 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Summertime.
This was a much better idea than the "Fuck around the World" premise. This should be good.
Good beginning. But poor Brian at the end. Silly Justin. As a cook he should know....The best way to a man's heart...is through his stomach....Don't take food away!
Date: Jun 09, 2016 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Song of Sand.
I like that Brian was the one to make the first move after the shower to invite into bed and even "cuddle"... I like the way Brian is trying to fight it but in his blissed out state his instinct is to be close to Justin!!! :D
Author's Response:
Bite your tongue! Brian Kinney doesn't cuddle! The very thought . . . *secretly laughing* TAG
Date: Jun 09, 2016 2:44 am Title: Chapter 2 - Talking Body.
Big roll of cookie dough!!!! Omg, the best 😂
Author's Response:
*hehehehe* Thought that would make the Cookiebun happy! TAG
Date: Jun 08, 2016 1:00 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Song of Sand.
Yes Tag you definitely 'hit the mark' as well as Brian's mark or should I say 'spot'.
I don't understand why they didn't immediately go into the ocean to rid themselves of all the sand...a little skinny dipping would've be fun.
Such a fun chapter in general though, love all the humor and banter between our boys, not to mention the sex!
Ideas for how to entertain Brian...Justin style....hmmmmm besides the morning blow job, shower fuck...making & feeding him breakfast...
Why don't they have a night of fabulous karaoke! Justin's friends can be back-up dancers too. Maybe one or both of them can show off some guitar skills as well. Just my 2 cents, for now...
Date: Jun 08, 2016 5:45 am Title: Chapter 3 - Song of Sand.
Don't worry, it didn't fall flat at all; my morning shower will be cold instead of warm.
It definitely hit the mark, as well as Justin (no pun intended of course)!
Date: Jun 07, 2016 9:07 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Talking Body.
This is going to be fun! You dirty little writers you, I love it!
Cookie & Mr. No Clams...hysterical!
More please!
Author's Response:
We hope you continue to have fun!
There is more where that came from.
T & S
Date: Jun 07, 2016 4:16 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Talking Body.
I remember, in Summer of Sin, Justin using his finger to destabilize Brian who was on top of a floating device. I laughed so hard on this chapter. It was really funny.
It's good to see that he used his finger once more to win this small competition. Not fair, but who cares except Brian.
I think we are headed to a busy and very hot summer.
Thank you for the quick update!
Author's Response:
We were more than happy to write a return of "The Sneaky Finger" !
T & S
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2016 2:15 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Talking Body.
This was SO stinking hot, I cannot even handle it. The twins were a great addition - and I loved how the trick that Justin was fucking defended him.
This bet is going to get hot and NASTY and I already know I am going to love every bloody minute of it. I can't wait to jump into the doc and help out. I may have a couple of dirty suggestions mwahahahahhahaa
Author's Response:
Dirty is our FAVORITE kind of suggestion!
T&S
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2016 11:50 am Title: Chapter 2 - Talking Body.
awwww! Aren't you sweet to dedicate to me? Thank you, thank you very much.
Need more dirt? You know where to find me...LOL
Saje
Date: Jun 06, 2016 6:56 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Summertime.
I loved this first chapter.
Cocky Justin is going to be fun.
I can't write anything but reviews. So I won't help a lot for building this summer treat.
I hope it will be as fun as Summer of Sin.
Author's Response:
So glad you like our cocky Justin. I'm thinking he's going to give Brian a run for his money! You should definitely drop by the working doc though - even if you don't write, we love visitors and you might be able to help fill in a word here and there as we go or catch all my typos! The more the merrier! TAG
[Report This]Date: Jun 06, 2016 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Summertime.
We're only on chapter one and I am already hooked. This is going to be one amazing summer story, I cannot wait to see how Justin gets his man :)
Can't wait to pop into the document and chip in, this is going to be SO much fun.
Author's Response:
Bwahaha! That means my evil plan is working . . . lure them in with sex and then they'll have to keep reading all summer long! LOL. Looking forward to seeing you in the working copy. The more the merrier! TAG
Date: Jun 06, 2016 4:28 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Summertime.
Already LOVING everything about this! Brian has found himself a whole heap of TROUBLE with impish insatiable Justin! I'm so looking forward to watching their dynamic develop with these two completely different but thoroughly jaded men.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Author's Response:
Yay! So happy you enjoyed the start. And there is much, much more fun to come! This Justin definitely has some dom tendencies . . . we may need your expertise here! LOL TAG
Date: Jun 06, 2016 3:22 am Title: Chapter 1 - Summertime.
This is the beginning of an amazing story!!! How will "Cookie" get his man???
Author's Response:
That depends on how we write it! LOL. Thanks for helping get this started! TAG