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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2016 7:15 pm Title: Chapter 13 - The Bridge.

It's nice that everyone had a happy ending.  Even Stockwell.  Afterall he escaped so for him it was happy.

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Date: Aug 13, 2016 3:49 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Michael.

Okay we have Mikey showing up and where Mikey is Ben is not far away.   Then we learn that Brian supposedly knows Deb who is Mikey's mom.  Do we know where Brian and Justin are?  Just hanging around.

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Date: Aug 13, 2016 1:57 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Woes of Emmy Lou.

The good news is we now know who or what Emmy Lou is.  The bad news is that our boys are back in the clutches of Mr. X thanks to slimey Ethan. 

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Date: Aug 13, 2016 5:11 am Title: Chapter 10 - A Question of Gratitude.

Ted and Emmett to the rescue!!!!  Now we learn how Emmy Lou became Emmy Lou?

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Date: Aug 13, 2016 5:02 am Title: Chapter 9 - The Mine.

So you've left us hanging yet again.  Good thing I know there are more chapters so it doesn't end here. 

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Date: Aug 12, 2016 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 8 - At the Bank => Part 2.

Oh no, the evildoers look like they'll get away with it.  H E L P !!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2016 9:08 pm Title: Chapter 7 - At the Bank => Part 1.

Gee, this small town in Canada has, how many ... Brian, Justin, Ethan Gold, Emmy Lou Gold, Emmett Honeycutt, Ted and evidently the masked man, the crooked cop.  That makes 8 so far.  That's a lot. 

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Date: Aug 12, 2016 2:30 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Lumberjack and the Snooty Suit.

I'm heartened to see no cliff hanger.  My heart could not take it.  I do enjoy reading about Emmett though. 

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Date: Aug 11, 2016 9:25 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Mr. X.

You do love those cliffhangers. 

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Date: Aug 11, 2016 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Justin in a Bind.

This chapter was suspensefully written.  Love how you were able to get into the dog's mentality.  Then you give us a cliffhanger.  A perfect chapter.

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Date: Jul 18, 2016 3:16 am Title: Chapter 3 - Heroes and Villains.

You've reved up the amp.  Fortunately I know that ...

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Date: Jul 17, 2016 2:31 am Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner and Dating.

Holy Perials of Pauline or Justin in this case.  Good thing I know who the evil man is and that the good guys win.

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Date: Jul 17, 2016 12:41 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Ride on Midnight.

Who cares about the date.  This story is terrific.  You have a way with words and Brian has a way with actions.  This is going to be fun to read again.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Ride on Midnight.

Oooh! I look forward to where you're taking this and I can't wait to read more. Great idea :)

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