Reviews For Independence Day
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Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2016 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great premise for a story.

Loved it.

Please write a sequel to this. 

It will be great.

~Lorie



Author's Response:

Oh I am, I have the basic story already in my head.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2016 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

I don't think I've ever read a 4th of July fic in this fandom. I'm saving this one for that weekend. Can't wait! TAG



Author's Response:

Oh, I hope you like it. YAY.

Reviewer: augusta70 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2016 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was great. I love the whole idea of Vic rescuing the kids and giving them a better life.  It actually made perfect sense that the kids would follow Vic's lead and say he was their godfather, even though they'd only known him a day.  They knew they'd be better off with him than anywhere else they'd end up, or even than where they'd been.  I'd love to see this story continue.  Kind of an updated version of the old TV show Family Affair.  



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it. I was worried it would be too far out there for people. I'll start on the sequel after I finish my other stories.

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