[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2020 2:11 am Title: Chapter 5
Every time I read this I want to cheer Jennifer on.
Date: Jan 05, 2017 3:34 am Title: Chapter 5
I can't understand how she still thinks it is anyone but her precious idiot's fault!
Date: Jul 27, 2016 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
Deb needs to snap back into reality... I hope it is soon. Carl hopefully can talk some sense into her
Date: Jul 07, 2016 3:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
Brian: “Mel, if I kill someone, or say Jen does, can we get justifiable homicide?”
Jen and Deb fighting: “Fuck you Deb, I don’t care if Brian fucked the President at Pride you do not hit my son.” Jen yelled.
Brian: Now I really wished that she could have said Johnny Depp or Patrick Swayze but not Bush, never Bush but I digress.
I only extracted those but the rest is so much fun!
Date: Jul 06, 2016 1:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
Merow! Cat Fight! LMAO!!! ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2016 12:48 am Title: Chapter 5
Hahaha! Deb & Jen in a all out cat fight? No idea where you came up with this but it was hilarious. TAG
Date: Jun 29, 2016 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
Excellent visual! I imaginied all in my mind as I read it. Absolutely hilarious! Jenn ROCKS!!!!!!! Talk about Mama bear!
Glad Brian kept Deb where she is adn said what he did. Not sure if what he said will hit home with her. Not sure if she'll ever take the blinders off with regards to her "perfect son" But when EVERYONE is telling you he's nuts....you'd think at some point she'd listen. Maybe Vic will give her something to think about. (is he alive in this?? I can't remember if you've mentioned him or not. Sorry)
Completely addictedx to this fic of yours and anticipate every update. Can't wait for the next one.
Nutball Lindsey is up next I gather. this should be interesting. Pretty sure Mel isn't going to put up with much.
Author's Response:
I am taking it a little easy on Lindsey for now. But i think that she is going to try to reform but can't. Deb really does see that Michael is out of control but she isn't going to stop trying to see her son in a good light. Thank you for letting me know you enjoy this.
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2016 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
This keeps getting better and better. Looking forward to an anti-linds chapter. Gotta feel sorry for Carl because I'm not even sure the truth will get through to Deb.
Author's Response:
Carl is more rational and i think this might tip him over the edge. Linds is going to behave for a little while because on the show she is good for a little while then we see the sense of entitlement that she thinks is hers.
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2016 2:27 am Title: Chapter 5
WAY TO GO JENNIFER!!! I love that Woman lol Yeah I am not surprised Jen went for Deb because she totally deserved it the woman is just as delusional as her son, I wonder what Carl is going to do? I wouldn't have bailed her out either she needs to be restrained for a few hours. Now Michael is getting further from shore and someone is going to have to throw a net over him before he attacks someone who doesn't believe with his warped ideas. Not surprised we are getting an anti Lindsay chapter I guess it's her turn to go off the deep end, maybe she, Michael and Deb can get locked in a cage and just duke it out? lol I love that you post the chapters so fast this story has me on the edge of my seat to find out what happens next?? 😃
Author's Response:
I love that you guys are enjoying this and I will be working on the next chapter tomorrow but i have a beta Lorie and she help to edit chapter one and will be editing each chapter. I started the next chapter but I will try to have her work with me on it first so it might be a day or three for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2016 2:27 am Title: Chapter 5
YES!!! Go SHE-RA! I mean JEN! Deb needed her ass whipped and I'm so GLAD that the WASP stung Debbie's ass but good! As for Lindsay.... I have the feeling that she is going to need a padded cell next to Michael's crazy ass. Well at least Mel is seeing the insanity. I laughed hard when she got the full scoop from Brian. I don't think she'll be blaming Brian for any of this, including her own partner's slide into Bitchdom! How could she when the evidence of idiocy is clear?! SMH...Lawd Ham Turkey! Two nuts and a Jen that went Butchified Ghetto. This story right here is ADDICTIVE!! And I'm craving MORE!!! Get to work!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I am working don't worry.