Date: Apr 06, 2017 3:23 pm Title: Chapter 10
yes Lo... everyone takes care of Justin!
Date: Jan 05, 2017 4:18 am Title: Chapter 10
Yup, Lo has made my love list lol
Date: Jul 27, 2016 9:06 pm Title: Chapter 10
I like Lo!!!!!
Date: Jul 07, 2016 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 10
Michael stealing Justin's tricks: yeah, riiiiiiight! He really has no clue at all..
Date: Jul 06, 2016 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love it Michael, is in the line of fire from Lo and Daphne... You Go Girls!!! ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2016 1:42 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh, I like Lo. Mikey trying to steal tricks - that's funny! Love the Ted, Emmett and Daphne moments. Deb caused her own problems, Justin told her the truth and she couldn't take it.
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2016 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 10
I LOVE Lo! It's a damn shame that Brian and Justin can't even have a night out without Michael acting a fool! And dancing around, hip-checking Justin and talking about stealing Justin's tricks as if it were even possible...smh Michael needs a tranquilizer dart to the ass- just knock him out until he gains some damn sense! And Debbie still wants people to help him? You really can't fix ignorant. I hope Ted, Em and Daphne work out exactly what Michael is doing before Justin is forced to defend himself... or Brian is!
Looking forwatd to MORE! Happy Writing and HUGS!
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Lo is my sister who was hanging out with me and saw me writing this. I have never written anything before so she was curious. Then she asked to be a serial killer or a cat lady named Loco Lo but i want her to be a badass. Now as for Michael, tell me you wouldn't do the same if not worse. It just isn't any fun any other way.
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2016 3:35 am Title: Chapter 10
Lo I Think I Love You!!! lol I think everyone should take cover because Michael is getting to blow, Brian is right to be worried about Justin I think if Michael gets the chance he will attack Justin, I like the fact that Ted, Emmett and Daphne are hanging out, I see Deb is still buying into Michael's delusions I feel so bad for Ben and Hunter they didn't ask to be in this situation, I also feel bad for Carl too because when Michael blows there is going to be a lot of casualties.
Author's Response:
My sister wanted to be in the story but i don't have any room for a serial killer or a cat lady so this is what she got. I am going to go through a couple days of Micheal's stalking because the King of Babylon is going to be a mess.