Date: Apr 06, 2017 4:01 pm Title: Chapter 14
I hope Debbie sees the truth now... she starts to see it, then she regresses again... wise up... or Michael will drag you down too
Date: Jan 05, 2017 4:51 am Title: Chapter 14
Justin is gonna love his trip!
Date: Jul 27, 2016 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 14
Yay for Debbie finally realizing she can't "save Michael" and yay for Ben for finally accepting things too and moving on!
Date: Jul 07, 2016 6:20 pm Title: Chapter 14
Long review because I had to extract my favorite parts:
- Daphne: Justin fills me in on the “wifey visits’ as Brian is calling them and then tells me about the comic thing. I miss so much some days. I feel someone wrap their hands around me and kiss my ear. I really wish Brian had a straight brother.
“How’s it going my goddess.” I can’t help it, I giggled.
“Good, Emmett is with me. We have to go look for Captain Astro stupidity. Seen your wife lately?” I ask as I turn to look at Brian.
“Well, Justin is behind you, so yes, but if you’re talking about Deb’s spawn no.” I stare at Brian.
We all know Brian loves Justin, he doesn’t run around proclaiming it, but it’s there to see. When he called Justin the wife, it’s his way of telling us. The best way to react is to do nothing.
And, the last one that cracked me up:
We look in and the music has changed and we see Michael dance by he grabs one of the wall racks and start to do a backbend. I don’t think the racks are made to hold up a grown man and they prove it when they give and Michael and the racks fall backwards. Ouch that had to hurt.
Date: Jul 05, 2016 12:51 am Title: Chapter 14
Such a fun story- I love all the different points of view- great getting into everyone's head
Author's Response:
I hate wondering what people are thinking, so I have to have everyone tell. Thank you for reading.
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2016 8:15 pm Title: Chapter 14
It's about time someone told Deb how things are getting out of hand. Ben's better off without Mikey, even Hunter doesn't want to stay with Mikey.
Author's Response:
I let Ben live in hope too long. Unlike Michael he is going to have fun. I have a surprise with Ben involved.
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2016 7:50 pm Title: Chapter 14
Jumping Jehosophat!!!! Deb FINALLY has a clue!! I hope it lasts! I'm so damn happy that Daphne figured out what Michael was up to. Of course the idiot still insists upon getting up on stage probably looking like he's being electocuted BUT at least Daphne and Emmett did their civic duties in trying to warn him that he shouldn't. Also happy for the light bulb to have gone off in Ben's head! One cannot fix stupid or crazy if the idiot in question doesn't want help. And it's apparent that Michael is hellbent on living in his delusion. I think everyone understands that now...even Deb! Looking forward to more!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Michael is going to be sorry after the contest. I'll save it for a surprise.