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Reviewer: NoChaser Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2016 4:28 pm Title: Chapter 13 - ­The Lost Boy (August 9, 1999 ­ 7:30 pm)

This is such a sad, but heartwaming, chapter! Brian wondering where his friend (imagine! a *real* *unreal* friend!) is, opening himself up in a way he could never, ever do in real life. Six pages of handwritten Brian thoughts! Oh, my. 

I had forgotten how heart-felt all this was. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Roni - I always thought that Brian would be more likely to open up when he wouldn't have to 'face' the consequences of revealing his feelings. Hence, the letters and the way they let him be himself wihtout feeling the expectations of the person listening to him. It would give him more freedom. He wouldn't be watching every single word to make sure he wasn't being rejected for it. Or, at least, that's what I was going with here. Glad you're liking it. Thanks for reading (again). TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 13 - ­The Lost Boy (August 9, 1999 ­ 7:30 pm)

Brian is so worried he almost became too talkative. At least, he didn't destroy his letter.

How will Justin react? Will he explain what happened?

Reviewer: 7Wildwaysup Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2016 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 13 - ­The Lost Boy (August 9, 1999 ­ 7:30 pm)

Of course I cheated and read someone's comment on the last chapter about them not ending up together... Not happy about that! So I took a break, I know, stupid thing to do... After sleeping on it, as you can see I'm back.


I'm thinking maybe Brian is really a ghost, and that maybe since Justin wasn't part of his life in 2000, it's possible that he didn't survive the scarfing incident... I know, just read the fic... ha, ha, ha...

Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Don't believe what somebody else's review says - they may not understand . . . And, nope, no ghosts involved. You'll just have to keep reading. Not going to give away the ending for you! TAG

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2016 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 13 - ­The Lost Boy (August 9, 1999 ­ 7:30 pm)

Hmmm.  They are both loosing time in the current time lines.  And having sexual fantasies about each other. 

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