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Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2016 11:59 am Title: Chapter 22 - After the Art Show (October 2, 1999 – 9:00 pm)

Hello again! Another great and amazing story! This was your first one? I'm so amazed. It so well written! I love the connection you built between them and their conversations. It's so cute and beautiful. I'm also very curious and excited because I think that Brian will be at Justins Prom... And yeah, this chapter... Sooo beautiful and also hot. But I think that this moment will change the future. Maybe it would have been better if Brian stayed away...? Like I said, I'm very curious about the development. Thanks again for another awesome story! Warmest regards, a.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2016 10:32 am Title: Chapter 35 - In Unison. (May 20, 2002 ­ 8:30 pm)

This story was amazing!!!!  Makes me want to go watch The Lake House. lol 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2016 7:44 pm Title: Chapter 35 - In Unison. (May 20, 2002 ­ 8:30 pm)

So much angst... and then so much hot sweaty sex... yeah, very happy reader!!!

The bracelet is back as THE medium of this beautiful story (not to forgot the mailbox).

You can be very proud of this first story because it's so well thought, built and written. You used some canon parts (Daphne and her peach yogurt for example) and some dry humour.

I have some questions in my mind, but I won't ask them now. I need to make a list and share it with you if you don't mind.

I didn't mean to have the 100th review written, but I'm happy about it. I'm so disappointed I wrote the 69th and didn't realize it.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2016 7:30 pm Title: Chapter 34 - Don't Go, Brian! (May 20, 2002 ­ 5:30 pm)

Major cliffhanger!!!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2016 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Best Laid Plans . . . (May 20, 2000 ­ 1:30 pm)

Another hard part for several reasons:
- Justin puts 2&2 together and knows who was the good Samarithan and why Brian wasn't at the restaurant on December 31th
- many people lied to him to avoid more stress
- he also realizes that this day is the D day and he can't warn Brian because he asked him not to write anymore, therefore, not to wait for other letters

For once, Michael's usual foot in the mouth helps to let Justin know where the painting is coming from.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2016 7:15 pm Title: Chapter 32 - For Justin. (January 31, 2000 ­ 4:00 pm)

This it: Brian leaves his first home and prepares it for his future tenant and plans the renovation of his future home.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2016 7:08 pm Title: Chapter 31 - Alone. (January 7, 2000 ­ 9:30 am)

Distraught Brian is not a beautiful sight. For once, I was glad that the best friend took his job at heart and managed to shake the stud out of his misery.

At least, Brian was able to go out and to clear the air with Justin.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2016 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Broken Date. (December 27, 2001 ­ 6:30 pm)

Gut wrenching chapter, as hard to read as to watch in the movie. I can see this scene without crying (same for the last scene).

Justin's decision to ask Brian not to write him anymore is so painful.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2016 6:55 pm Title: Chapter 29 - The Babylon Experience. (December 18, 1991 ­ 10:30 pm)

What a chapter!!!

Horny and twicked out Justin made an incursion in Babylon. Did he come to meet with Brian or was it a coincidence?

The very hot scene in the backroom could have ended in the loft if the "boyfriend" hadn't interrupted them. I guess Brian wasn't too pleased to see Justin in a strange state and to think he wasn't single anymore.

Was it Ethan?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2016 6:42 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Debbie. (November 26, 1999 ­ 10:00 pm)

Wow, that was hard for the boys. Fortunately, Deb is strong.

The gift from Justin is just amazing. It's a beautiful idea to paint flowers. At the same time, it gives Brian a reason to reveal a little about Justin.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2016 6:36 pm Title: Chapter 27 - The Prom. (November 20, 2001 ­ 2:00 pm)

Glad to see that Brian supports Justin through this painful event, and I guess it will probably have an impact on their futures.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2016 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 26 - ­ Following Directions. (November 10, 2001 ­ 6:30 pm)

Their sexmails and their sexgames are as meaningful and playful. Can't wait to have them reunited.

What about Justin's game? Brian didn't play yet, did he?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2016 4:49 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Dinner with the Munchers (October 8, 1999 ­ 6:30 pm)

Brian is so impatient to find Justin that he almost begged Lindsay for the address.

Who were the noisy teens?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2016 4:31 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Pain and Panic (October 5, 1999 – 7:00 pm)

Excellent!!!

It started very dark and desperate but ended with a big smile and relief.

Well done!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2016 4:17 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Back to the Future (October 3, 2001 – 6:30 pm)

Good to read that Justin finally remembered that night.

One more panic attack and no bracelet on the wrist.

Is the fading image one of the bracelet on Brian's wrist?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2016 4:00 pm Title: Chapter 22 - After the Art Show (October 2, 1999 – 9:00 pm)

Yee Haw indeed!!!

I loved the whole chapter, but you got me with "I want you to remember ME" because Brian knows that it won't be the case.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2016 9:01 pm Title: Chapter 21 - At the GLC (October 2, 1999 – 7:00 pm)

This is genius: using the GLC show to allow Brian to see the paintings and find out the one he got via the sexmailer is not the first one that has been drawn.

He needs to know if Justin is present and to meet him; only, Justin has absolutely no idea who Brian is. And then, Brian finally finds out the color of Justin' eyes, hair; needless to talk about the smile...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2016 5:46 am Title: Chapter 20 - Gus (September 7, 2001 – 7:30 am)

Ha ha ha... Justin and his needy little ass! What an understatement! I guess we will have some more of that later on (one can hope).

Brian and his son: so much left unsaid in the series, but all the moments Brian held Gus in S1 were overwhelming. I don't know if it was Gale's acting or Gale's true self or both, but it added to the charm oozing from the images (the scene in the kitchen while he waits for his delivery before his father shows up - "Gus, think nipple. Think cock. Whatever get you there"). But, I digress.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2016 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Playtime (September 6, 2001 – 6:20 pm)

Hilarious!!!

Poor Justin, he was ready to pass out for being over stimulated, to avoid not following the instructions.

About these, I forgot to tell how funny it was to have Brian writing them at the diner.

Too bad Justin wasn't able to realize Brian is a dad now.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2016 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 18 - How to Accessorize, by Brian Kinney ­ (September 5, 1999 – 1:00 pm)

I love how they feel each other and know when something is wrong. Loved also Brian's brainstorming for naming their exchanges.

The comments of Justin on the sex toys catalogue were very funny. The fact that Justin can choose something that doesn't even exist on Brian's time is really tricky. Same for the mail from the future that Brian gets via Justin.

Michael is as nosy and whiny as ever... and Emmett always ready for a good gossip... Where is Ted with his witty remarks?

Reviewer: NoChaser Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2016 4:28 pm Title: Chapter 13 - ­The Lost Boy (August 9, 1999 ­ 7:30 pm)

This is such a sad, but heartwaming, chapter! Brian wondering where his friend (imagine! a *real* *unreal* friend!) is, opening himself up in a way he could never, ever do in real life. Six pages of handwritten Brian thoughts! Oh, my. 

I had forgotten how heart-felt all this was. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Roni - I always thought that Brian would be more likely to open up when he wouldn't have to 'face' the consequences of revealing his feelings. Hence, the letters and the way they let him be himself wihtout feeling the expectations of the person listening to him. It would give him more freedom. He wouldn't be watching every single word to make sure he wasn't being rejected for it. Or, at least, that's what I was going with here. Glad you're liking it. Thanks for reading (again). TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2016 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Reciprocating Gifts (August 21, 2001 – 2:00 pm)

So funny how Justin's resolution for shopping went to the drain when he finally saw Brian's best asset. What would I give to see the picture...

The description itself was hot as hell. Yes, Brian is gorgeous and he's not shy about it.

I loved the note that was with the pictures.

Nice to have some time with Daphne.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2016 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Welcome to The Liberty Diner (August 16, 1999 – 8:00 am)

The gift is a very good way for Brian to show he cares about Justin and also an incentive for him to paint which he's not very motivated to do.

First meeting with the gang, at least 3 of them. Is Brian secluded in his new location or is he at work or ...?



Author's Response:

Or. It's definitely the 'or' choice. LOL. TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2016 1:41 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Opening Up (August 10, 2001 – 4:00 pm)

I think guessed who the good Samaritan was and why Justin thinks he never met Brian.

Big twist indeed.

To add some more attraction, Justin just found the idea to help Brian on his campaign.

I love this story! 



Author's Response:

No fair - you've seen the movie so you had a lot of clues guessing about my Good Samaritan! LOL. Glad you like my version though. Thanks for reading. TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2016 1:17 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Sweet Dreams (August 10, 2001 ­ 8:00 am)

This dream... Almost real.

I took a cold shower instead of the warm I planned to take.

Is it because of the letter or the bracelet that Justin is so sensitive to his landlord? Both maybe?

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