Date: Jul 30, 2016 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Chicago
What an entertaing story, I am looking foward to the sequel. It's refreshing to read something where Brian's friends are supportive -especially Michael. I have always had trouble liking Michael due to his endless changes from good friend to manipulative harpy, clueless to the effect his behaviour has on Brian and Ben. Much more balanced Mikey here:-)
Date: Jul 11, 2016 9:26 pm Title: Chapter 15 - No More Pretending
I would love to read a sequel. You have a way of bringing your characters to life that is absolutely amazing. Thank you for your hard work.
Date: Jul 11, 2016 8:15 pm Title: Chapter 14 - The Better Side of Worse
If these two would just talk to each other for a change it would be soooo much easier.
Date: Jul 11, 2016 9:19 am Title: Chapter 13 - To Hold On
Now Brian just has to admit that he is totally in love with Justin and everything will be perfect. Although it sounds a little bit too good to be true.
Date: Jul 11, 2016 8:39 am Title: Chapter 12 - Your Imagination
I'm really glad Justin decided to call his mother. Maybe they can work on building some kind of relationship again.
Date: Jul 11, 2016 8:22 am Title: Chapter 11 - Worthy
Oh, I wonder what Justin's mother will have to say to him. I found their reaction to totally cut him out of their life so cold. Maybe she has an explanation.
Date: Jul 11, 2016 8:07 am Title: Chapter 10 - Martyr . . . dum, dum, dum
Wow, they actually went through with it. I thought there would be something that would go wrong.
Date: Jul 11, 2016 7:55 am Title: Chapter 9 - The Cost
I'm not really sure the family will be able or willing to keep their mouths shut but we will have to see what happens.
Date: Jul 11, 2016 7:18 am Title: Chapter 8 - The Root of The Problem
Soooooo hot. That's all I'm able to say right now.
Date: Jul 11, 2016 12:12 am Title: Chapter 7 - Fortunate Son
Oh Brian what are you getting yourself into?
Date: Jul 11, 2016 12:02 am Title: Chapter 6 - Poor Man
I'm laughing so hard right now. I can't even imagine how two of them will manage to get out if this one.
Date: Jul 10, 2016 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Torrent
Well it seems the story continues. I hope Brian can find a way to help Justin.
Date: Jul 10, 2016 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Cascade
Oh, I can't wait to hear more about Justin's past. This is really interesting.
Date: Jul 10, 2016 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Submerged
I wonder why Justin needs that amount of money so desperately.
Date: Jul 10, 2016 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Cover Me
A whole weekend together. That should be fun. Although I assume these two might be a little headstrong for too much fun.
Date: Jul 10, 2016 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Chicago
An interesting start. I can't wait to read more.
Date: Jul 09, 2016 8:15 pm Title: Chapter 15 - No More Pretending
Thank you for the wonderful story!
I hope to read more of it soon.
Date: Jul 09, 2016 5:33 pm Title: Chapter 14 - The Better Side of Worse
Rough chapter; I'm impressed Michael was so nice to Justin.
Date: Jul 09, 2016 4:44 pm Title: Chapter 13 - To Hold On
Brian is falling and he doesn't feel that Justin is as well: that's too bad.
Date: Jul 09, 2016 4:05 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Your Imagination
Gus is too much fun with Justin.
I loved that you kept Justin's mom divorced and living with Tucker. They were good together and she deserved to be happy.
Date: Jul 09, 2016 2:57 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Worthy
The banter with the phone was very funny: I love how they are good together.
Even Lindsay might cool off.
Date: Jul 09, 2016 2:17 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Martyr . . . dum, dum, dum
Hot and sweet... I liked the references to some QAF lines.
I don't like how Lindsay is reacting; I hope she will keep quiet.
Date: Jul 09, 2016 1:02 pm Title: Chapter 8 - The Root of The Problem
So fucking hot and romantic: way to go Brian!!! 2 remaining on the 3 he owes Justin...
Date: Jul 09, 2016 11:48 am Title: Chapter 7 - Fortunate Son
Randall is really nosy and can't get any clue.
How Brian is going to get out of this without going down?
Date: Jul 09, 2016 11:02 am Title: Chapter 6 - Poor Man
Poor Brian: having a date on V day!!! I smell something will come up and neither Brian nor Justin will be OK with.