Date: Dec 22, 2021 4:21 pm Title: Chapter 21
This was a great story, with a great ending!! I loved it
Date: Dec 12, 2020 9:38 pm Title: Chapter 21
I have discovered your stories and I am enjoying Covid lockdowns reading them. This is another brilliant multi chapter story with angst and love. Excellent to hear the kids POVs
Date: Apr 25, 2017 3:22 am Title: Chapter 21
I'm glad you had this idea... great story!!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2016 5:32 pm Title: Chapter 21
Great use of angst and humor. Tears rolled down my face as I laughed at Gus saying he loved you twats! Kids are awesome that way.
Keep up the good work!
Date: Aug 21, 2016 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 21
Loved this! So happy that Gus could call Justin any time he needed help and Justin would drop everything to be there. Very happy that Justin never kept anything from Brian, too!
Typical self-absorbed Michael at his best!
Glad the girls were able to work through their problems and become a family again with everyone.
Deb
Date: Jul 21, 2016 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 21
A perfect ending to a really nice story. Thank you for your hard work.
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2016 2:51 am Title: Chapter 21
Grownups really ARE complicated, aren't they? Lol. You did a great job writing about them though. Excellent job staying in character with everyone. I'm glad it seems you've caught the fanfic bug too. Keep it up. And tell Lorie thanks for her beta efforts, she's a sweetheart! TAG
Date: Jul 13, 2016 2:39 pm Title: Chapter 21
That was great! Thanks for sharing, and they all lived happily ever after...
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 12, 2016 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 21
I definitely enjoyed this story!! You have done an amazing job drawing me in and holding me captive through your awesome skill of storytelling. Looking forward to more from you!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2016 3:34 pm Title: Chapter 21
I so enjoyed this story. It had it all, angst, humor and a fast pace. It also brought everyday problems into the light and showed solutions. Best of all it gave us a happy ending. Good job!
Date: Jul 12, 2016 3:18 pm Title: Chapter 21
Well done!! Nicely put together at the end. Glad Micheal was able to get his head out of his ass. Who'da thought getting smashed would've pixed it all. lol. At least now they all know and, in the future, just hand over a bottle of Beam! :)
Everyone is happy and the kids are flourishing. Not much more a parent can ask for.
Looking forward to your next one.
Cheers
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2016 10:04 am Title: Chapter 21
Awww. JR and Gus are so well adjusted. I'm sure whatever your idea is it will be good.
Date: Jul 12, 2016 5:38 am Title: Chapter 21
Sweet and funny!
I loved :
“I LOVE ALL YOU TWATS”
Emmett was on the floor laughing. Dad and Papa didn’t react at first, then just started laughing. Michael and Ben just turned around, but their shoulders we shaking. The women didn’t seem amused. I figure put the blame where it belonged. I picked up the microphone again.
“Aunty Em said you call people you love that.” I am my Dad’s son.
Mama and Mom headed for Aunty Em, he was smart, he ran.
Michael still acts like an idiot sometimes, but Ben just tells him to get a drink. Dad said that with the way he Queens out he is going to be an alcoholic soon.