Date: Apr 24, 2017 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
So far I like it (not that I doubted it for a second, cmon, i like all your stuff!)... I'm a fan of the Mikey bashing, but I guess I can handle not bashing him too lol
I'm glad the kids have Justin, but I feel bad that Mel makes a point of saying Brian can't make decisions for his own son.
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2016 5:32 pm Title: Chapter 21
Great use of angst and humor. Tears rolled down my face as I laughed at Gus saying he loved you twats! Kids are awesome that way.
Keep up the good work!
Date: Aug 21, 2016 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 21
Loved this! So happy that Gus could call Justin any time he needed help and Justin would drop everything to be there. Very happy that Justin never kept anything from Brian, too!
Typical self-absorbed Michael at his best!
Glad the girls were able to work through their problems and become a family again with everyone.
Deb
Date: Jul 21, 2016 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 21
A perfect ending to a really nice story. Thank you for your hard work.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 20
I can just imagine Gus calling Brian a twat. Also I thought it was really funny that Jen found out about the king of Babylon.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 9:04 pm Title: Chapter 19
I always thought Ben would take a more active role in all of this. I mean he is very zen but I like to think he wouldn't let anyone treat him like that for a long time.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 18
Oh Michael, please don't start a scene at the "wedding".
Date: Jul 21, 2016 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 17
Yippee for Debbie. And also I hope Michael will finally grow a brain.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 4:49 pm Title: Chapter 16
I hope Michael won't destroy Brian's and Justin's party.
Date: Jul 21, 2016 8:35 am Title: Chapter 15
I wonder how much longer Ben will put up with Michaels behavior. He really must be a saint.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 9:43 pm Title: Chapter 14
Finally Brian is going to make an honest man out of Justin. I like it.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 9:13 pm Title: Chapter 13
Maybe Ben can talk some sense into Michael.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 12
Michael is such a brat and he doesn't even realize it.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 11
Aww, Gus has a crush on Daphne. That is just adorable.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 10
I'm glad that the girls are actually going to try.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 5:52 pm Title: Chapter 9
I can't believe Michael actually forgot JR. He really is only thinking of himself.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 8
Michael is getting really annoying. He is causing way more trouble than necessary.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 7:32 am Title: Chapter 7
Justin is right. Such news should be said in person. It's the best thing to do it like this.
Date: Jul 19, 2016 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'm glad Gus had the opportunity to let it all out. This is good for him.
Date: Jul 19, 2016 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
Michael seems very egoistic. I hope for him that he will find a way to communicate with his kid.
Date: Jul 19, 2016 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
I hope Michael won't make a scene at the barbecue.
Date: Jul 19, 2016 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
I think Theresa might have a crush on Justin. Could be funny to watch.
Date: Jul 19, 2016 9:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
I wonder what the girls reaction will be when Brian tells them he wants partial custody.
Date: Jul 19, 2016 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting beginning. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2016 2:51 am Title: Chapter 21
Grownups really ARE complicated, aren't they? Lol. You did a great job writing about them though. Excellent job staying in character with everyone. I'm glad it seems you've caught the fanfic bug too. Keep it up. And tell Lorie thanks for her beta efforts, she's a sweetheart! TAG