Date: Jul 17, 2021 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
Good for Mel on her decision and Brian backing her up...now back to Justin's ass
Linds is a huge Bitch ! I want her alone and miserable
Date: Jan 18, 2017 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow poor Mel needs all the support she can get. I'm so glad Brianis going to help along with the guys. I hope Gus goes to live with him and Justin.
Date: Jan 08, 2017 5:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
Lindsay is going to shit bricks when she realizes the Brian has sided with Mel.
Date: Nov 16, 2016 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
I so enjoy when Brian and Mel get along
Date: Aug 19, 2016 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really like when Mel and Brian get along... they don't have to be best buds, but I do think when you take away the "jealousy" that Linds causes, they would get along well enough
Date: Jul 13, 2016 3:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
Really enjoying this take on it all. Mel really seems to be realistic and not so angry at Brian. glad she's leaving and is talking to Brian about it. That she's putting the kids first. Will Lindsey even care the Gus is going with Mel or will she only see it as losing her tool for manipulation? Can't wait to read about all teh drama that you'll have happening!!
HA! so going to enjoy Lindsey's smack down!
Very excited for the boys to having this new little one.
saw your note that it'll be late today or even tomorrow. You realize you have completely spoiled us, getting at least one chapter a day. LOL. Now this short wait is going to seem torterous! lol
Hope all is well. Thank you for sharing yet another story with us!! Glad you seem to be enjoying thie process as well.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
I almost wanted to let Justin and Michael go Pink posse on her. My vacation ended so my writing anytime will be limited. I have new chapter done. Will post it when Lorie finishes beta. I will try to post once a day if possible till this is done. Thank you for sticking with me.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2016 10:44 am Title: Chapter 3
At least Mel is thinking about Gus and not just JR. This is getting exciting. We don't know what Lindsay will do once she finds out.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 7:11 am Title: Chapter 3
The plot is thickening... Poor Gus, well aware that something is definitely wrong with her mother.
I loved:
- Emmett said Mom has permanent PMS.
- She wants to be her mother.
- I was kind of listening, but you know looking at Justin naked is distracting.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 5:12 am Title: Chapter 3
And let the fireworks begin! Lindsay isn't going to be a happy camper.
Date: Jul 13, 2016 4:29 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm glad that Ben gave Mel all the info she needs to FINALLY be free of Lindsay. That bitch is certifiably INSANE! I know that there will be some angst once Mel takes Gus (aka Lindsay's Loophole for getting to Brian) away. Hopefully it won't count that she is the birth mother especially since it's evident that she has no one's best interests at heart except hers. If Lindsay wants her mother's life so much, perhaps she should go live with the shrew! Also glad that Michael is using his vocal abilities for good this time and giving Brian the neccessary information to deal with his baby mama. Perhaps a reward for him would be to have Lindsay locked up in a cell where she can't escape and let the masters of Whine (Michael) and Screech (Debbie) loose on her...LOL Now THAT would definitely straighten her out!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I keep writing to try to make your muse out do mine. Thanks for all the encouragement.