Date: Jun 24, 2019 8:10 pm Title: Chapter 8
UN. BE. LIEVABLE. Lindsay can't understand why she shouldn't continue receiving child support payments for a child that is no longer living with her; a child that she herself kicked out of the house.
Lindsay thinks "I need to make Brian see I am the only only who can make him happy." I think that what she really means is that however miserable Brian would be living with her, she can find ways to make him even more unhappy for not giving Lindsay her own way!
The QAF fanfic search site getithere.dreamwidth.com has a tag for this kind of situation: Lindsay is a psycho hosebeast.
Date: Jan 18, 2017 4:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
Eesh Lindsey is really going off the deep end isn't she, I seriouly fear what she might do. I really like Mel in this story and I hate her in the show, how you did that is a miracle. Gus is my fav you really have done yourself proud with this story for sure.
Date: Jan 08, 2017 8:50 pm Title: Chapter 8
It's nice to have a view into what Lindsay is thinking.
Date: Nov 16, 2016 5:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
Gus being so cognizent of the situation is both amazing and sad... amazing since he is as smart as Brian and Mel, but sad since he is so young to have to realize he isn't the most important person to his mother :(
Date: Aug 19, 2016 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 8
This family is so tight and supportive and work so well together. makes me happy!
Date: Jul 17, 2016 2:04 am Title: Chapter 8
nice update- Lindsay is still a bitch
Author's Response:
I am in love with chapter 10. I finished it and am waiting on Lorie to Beta it. I wanted to screw with Linds alot and I think I did. It should be up soon.
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2016 1:57 am Title: Chapter 8
Mom gives her the idea to push and pull Brian then when she comes to town Mama Peterson ain't got no time for her, now that is funny and so deserving for their little princess.
Hunter was funny the way he handled Lindsay I do love that young man :)
Nice that we are getting Gus point of view about Lindsay and I do find it interesting that she is all concerned about Gus, but never asked about JR once, smart of Brian to cut off the money so now Lindsay is really all alone, also smart of him putting in a clause ,that if they deny him access to his son then they have to pay back the support, how could Lindsay forget that part of the agreement especially since she barely has enough to pay for a lawyer?
She us so delusional about Brian and what he needs this woman never knew him she just liked the wrapping he came in, Lindsay the manipulator is not surprising you could see she liked the power it gave her especially over Brian.
Justin and Michael are having too much fun getting back at Kathy nice to see Carl joining in the fun too, I wonder what Mother Taylor will find out about Mrs. Peterson that Brian doesn't know already??
Date: Jul 16, 2016 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 8
Such a tangled Web is being weaved here.
Date: Jul 16, 2016 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
WOW! Lindsay just keeps digging herself into a deeper hole...and I'm LOVING it! She's the only one who can make Brian happy- HAAAAAAA!
Mel and Michael's talk was moving and informative. I think Mel is finally realizing all the ways that Lindsay kept playing her throughout the years.
Justin is hilarious!! I can't wait to see Katherine's reaction to Justin's 'Garden of Artistic Vision.' It's good that Cal is on his side too...LOL
So much plot going on and I'm so looking forward to watching you bring it altogther!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2016 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
What a fantastic chapter. Lindsay finally gets told that the money has dried up. Not even the police are will to help her. Love all the POVs.
Date: Jul 16, 2016 9:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
"Poor" Lindsay: she will have to back out or she will have to pay back all the money she received for Gus; it's going to be a tough choice.
Can't wait to see how she will react to that fact.
In the meantime, Justin and Michael are going wild; it's nice to see how they are close now. I liked how you explained how this happened.