Date: Jan 18, 2017 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 15
Omg lol that chapter made my day, I swear I could see her turning red from all the names .
Date: Jan 08, 2017 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 15
The neighbors reaction was amazing. So much fun.
Date: Nov 17, 2016 2:56 am Title: Chapter 15
Aka Todd! That garden party was fabulous!
Date: Aug 20, 2016 12:01 am Title: Chapter 15
I looked up each of the flowers you mentioned... LOVE it!!!
just wish I could see the trees.. but I can totally visualize it lol
Date: Jul 23, 2016 12:58 am Title: Chapter 15
Hilarious! That was great! ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 23, 2016 12:58 am Title: Chapter 15
Hilarious! That was great! ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 20, 2016 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 15
Lindsey is where she needs to be. shame her mom is such a bitch. She obviously learned her own behavior from her. Glad Nancy willgive gus's rights to Mel and Brian. Wonder how long she'll be away for.
The garden party.........what I've been highly anticipating. OMG.........I must say, I laughed so bloody hard reading this. I was on break at one of my jobs and people seriously were thinking I was a loon. I was in stiches!
The way you had everyone involved...the little details...everything. Absolutely brilliant description and so beyond my expectations! Loved it and have read it about 3 times just since last night.
I know you're getting ready to wrap this up. I really hope you think of something new to write! Your writing has developed even in such a short time. I was really impressed with your first story you put here, but even only 3 stories later there's a definite maturity and highly developed ability.
Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thank you I started this writing because I got to control what was done. I really thought I would fall on my face. My next one is at the beta this one isn't going to start out as funny but well I have to have humor so it will be there. Thank you for enjoying it.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 1:36 pm Title: Chapter 15
Nancy is getting her wish after all... well at least to some degree. With Nancy signing over the rights to Mel and Brian, Lindsay has no ties legally to her 'shameful past.' I doubt that Lindsay will be very happy with Nancy's decision but then again it won't really matter since Nancy admitted Lindsay into the facility and therefore Lindsay can't check herself out at will. That would be an interesting conversation to read about, LOL
LMFAO!!!!!! OMG! The Garden Party was Absolutely STUNNING and so befitting the Liberty Avenue Family! I'll bet that Katherine finally learned her lesson about being a nosy neighbor. If she starts harassing the person 3 doors down, I hope they take a page out of Justin's book. I wonder what the husband would have thought of all that? He probably would have laughed himself to hiccups at the sheer genius and hilarity of it all. Brian definitely taught them well! I swear if they ever make a QAF movie, I want to see this scene in it!!! This was CLASSIC!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S. Don't worry...another chapter of SLA is coming sooner than you think! The alternating POV approach in this story definitely inspired me to delve into the characters' psyches and pull out some hidden (and not so hidden) motivations for their actions. It should definitely be interesting!
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2016 10:36 am Title: Chapter 15
I can see that a lot of research went into this chapter. I really thought the Gardener's Association were real and to find out that it was Todd and Babylon dancers was hilarious. Wonder where Katie's husband was during all this?
Date: Jul 20, 2016 8:27 am Title: Chapter 15
Love it love it love it
Date: Jul 20, 2016 5:55 am Title: Chapter 15
You cracked me up with "the Gardener's Association members aka Todd and Babylon dancers for their help".
Poor Katherine: she really had no chance at all.
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2016 4:58 am Title: Chapter 15
I must now to your wicked genius, that was too funny I am going to be laughing about that for the rest of the night, Katie was out of her league the second she opened her mouth that garden will be quite a story for years to come *lmao*
Nancy committing Lindsay and signing Gus's custody to Brian and Mel is going to make Lindsay's head Pop when she finds out and that makes me giggle.
I wish there was pictures of that garden party I bet the flowers were beautiful and I bet Katie won't be able to look at flowers without cringing in embarrassment. *roflmao*
I think I am seriously going to cry when this ends, but I am going to love reading it all over again! ;)
Date: Jul 20, 2016 4:41 am Title: Chapter 15
Again...HILARIOUS!!!!