Date: Jan 08, 2017 9:33 am Title: Chapter 10
I'm hope Debbie is genuine. Hopefully they can get JR away from Mel and Lindsay. Their relationship is toxic for JRs recovery.
Date: Aug 08, 2016 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 10
Finally Debbie!!!!! stay on this path please...
hopefully this will be the beginning of the turn around :)
Date: Jul 24, 2016 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 10
YAY!!!!! Let's see Slutty Felony Stupid try to talk her way out of this one. I doubt that Horny Neglectful-Ass Stupid or Desperate Lying Stupid will be happy or grateful for Carl, Ted and Blake's assistance in keeping JR from having to immediately return to Canada to await trial....SMH And Gus owes Melanie for living there??? Really?? She really has no clue that without Gus she wouldn't have had a house to live in. I bet she has learned that lesson now...or maybe not?
As for Dumbass Denial Stupid...He lived up to and even supassed my expectation for his callousness. If I was Debbie, I would have taken a skillet and popped the bastard upside his head or at the very least called the cops to have him arrested for Grand larceny!
Speaking of Delusional Blindness Personified... Is it time to change her name to Delusion-No-More? Brian told her exactly what would happen if Michael got his hand on money and sadly for her, she was proven right! I'm glad that Brian is feeding her with a long-handled spoon and not going into accepting Debbie blindly. I'm also glad that Justin was able to have his say. Debbie has a long way to go in mending the bridges she's burned, if she ever can. Even Carl doesn't want to have anything to do with her sniveling, whiny, still-bound-by-the-umbilical cord- offspring. Shouldn't that tell her something? As far as her telling Michael to find someplace to live and actually sticking to it...Well we shall see what we shall see about that!
Another running commentary is forthcoming for the "Young, Old and Ridiculous" <in my Robin Leech voice> Looking forward to more of the life and trials of the Asinine Adults (Melanie, Lindsay and Debbie) and the Wonder Twits (Michael and JR)!
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I am to please the goddess of Ansty stories. This one is almost over. I am writing something new. I don't know for sure what but you'll probably see it tomorrow.
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2016 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 10
Gotta love this. At least Deb is with the here and now and Mia likes her. Mikey is a dweb. JR has problems and Linds is about to be arested as well. Blake is a sweetheart to help JR. Can't wait to see your next chapter!
Date: Jul 24, 2016 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
JR is an evil pest and I hope she will realize that very soon.
Finally, Debbie saw the light: it was more than time. But as Justin said, she might say things without thinking. She has no filter or it's out of order.
As for "Dumbass Denial Stupid" to paraphrase Nichelle, he fell right into his old habits.
I can't wait to read how the mighty WASP and the bull lawyer will deal with the felony.
So much fun to come!!
Attn Nichelle: you crack me up with your comments on each chapter; it's almost a story within the story; it's a delight for my eyes or like a chocolate cake after a good meal.