Date: Jan 08, 2017 10:00 am Title: Chapter 11
Michael is so stupid. God for Gus that he was able to stand up to his mom.
Date: Aug 08, 2016 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 11
YAY Debbie!!!!
Funny to watch Lindsay and Mel turn on each other... love that!
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2016 12:52 am Title: Chapter 11
I'm happy that Mel, Lindsay and Mikey are getting what they deserve. From what I can see giving Deb a second chance might be worth it. Lindsay made a big mistake when she tried to push everything off on Mel. I feel sorry for Ben, I just hope that JR treats him with the respect he deserves. Mikey still doesn't get it.
Date: Jul 25, 2016 12:37 am Title: Chapter 11
So Delusional-No-More (for now at least) is following through on evicting Dumbass... Why do I feel that she will fall into old habits once she finds out that he lost his store and all the contents in it? Which is exactly what I'm waiting to see happen. Perhaps without his toys he might actually grow up...faulty theory but worth a try right?
Speaking of Dumbass Denial Stupid, it's going to be interesting to see what happens when he really understands just what he lost. Ben has moved on and by the sounds of it has a terrific husband who puts his needs FIRST. I imagine that being the VP of Operations for Liberty Air, Brad doesn't make chump change. A much better fit for an intelligent professor than a man-child who never grew up. I would think actually being able to hold an adult conversation and one that doesn't revolve around comic books would be refreshing to Ben. I'm looking forward to seeing how DDS and Desperate Lying Stupid are going to react to this change!
Speaking of changes.... can I just tell you that I had the fist pump and loud cheering going on full-blast reading about the downfalls of Slutty Felony Guilt-inducing Stupid and Horny Neglectful-Ass Accusation-throwing Stupid!! Yeah, I just had to add to their names once again! Lindsay telling Gus that he had to tell his father that he allowed her to use the card was laughable. I absolutely LOVED his response to her, telling Lindsay that he was going to do exactly what she had done for him when Mel was throwing him out. Now THAT response was befitting of Brian Kinney's son!
As far as Mel's comment that if Lindsay wasn't letting every cock near her snatch then she would have had time to pay attention to the kids...WOW Pot trying to tell off Kettle? Really? I have so many issues with Mel's self-righteousness and blame-shifting that I can't even list them all. However, I would love it if someone would point out that JR's latest stint in lock-up was because she was laid out for Layla. Whether Lindsay was there or not, JR came out of HER snatch and she should have been more vigiliant with HER daughter!
Thank you for allowing me to give my play-by-play "Young, Old and Ridiculous" reviews on this story!! This one will keep my tongue wagging and fingers typing for years to come!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Attn Claire: LOL!! I can't help it! I'm just calling the crazy as I see it!! HUGS!
Author's Response:
I think I write just to read your opinion. I love that people got so involved in all these stories. This one is going to end in the next chapter because I feel it would lose to much if I didn't. I do have another one I've been playing with. Its Anti-Michael but not to the extremes that I have gone to in the others. I hope to have enough done to post tomorrow.
Date: Jul 25, 2016 12:17 am Title: Chapter 11
I know a ladies who coordinates her clothes with her sphynx kitties! They are super loving kitties who often bond to one person... Gus and Vinnie will be great for one another. Good for Debbie, she needs counseling as much as the rest of them. The write excellent bad guys! Do you have an approximate chapter count for this story?
Author's Response:
It's thirteen for this story. I want to write so the story doesn't become to boring.
Date: Jul 24, 2016 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 11
Everyone is getting exactly what they deserve.
Date: Jul 24, 2016 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 11
So happy to see a new chapter!! As excellent as the previous.
JR should be relieved that Ted, Blake and Ben took and will take care of her.
The munchers continue to destroy themselves as Dumb the First.
I loved:
Pop started muttering that hopefully Armani doesn’t make cat suits
I looked at Pop and said we should buy matching sweaters at the Big Q for the animals. He told me Big Q is Dad’s punishment for allowing Deb in the house.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading me and commenting it helps me change a direction if I need to.