Date: Aug 05, 2021 10:27 am Title: Chapter 13
This was a great story from start to finish!! Mel, Lindsay and Michael all deserve each other. Thank goodness JR finally found a good home with Brad and Ben. I think that was the only thing that could have helped her.
Date: Apr 05, 2020 3:07 am Title: Chapter 13
Just love it..Great Lindsey and Michael bashing
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2018 2:25 am Title: Chapter 13
I just loved this story- I must have read it half a dozen times already- I think the way you describe the characters thoughts works really well and I can absolutely believe they would act in those ways given the circumstances- you really nailed Michael and Lindsay perfectly! A really enjoyable story all around- thank you so much for writing and sharing this :)
Date: Feb 11, 2018 3:10 pm Title: Chapter 13
Beautiful story.
[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2017 10:47 am Title: Chapter 13
I loved this story so much! It was so pleasing to see Lindsay go to jail for stealing the money! She basically lives her life on others peoples money and feels like she’s entitled to it- I hate that so much, so thanks for not letting her get away with it. Thanks for writing this wonderful fic.
p.s. I thought it was kinda funny that you said you wanted to write a more light hearted story and mentioned the idea of brain running after Michael and neglecting Justin- ironic since I’ve just been reading that fic (and loving it) but it is the most heartbreaking and painful to read story I’ve read of yours ;)
Thank you for continuing to write and share your awesome stories!
Date: Jan 08, 2017 10:30 am Title: Chapter 13
It's good to see that all the important people found their peace.
Date: Aug 21, 2016 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 13
So glad the girls didn't get away with what they did and that JR got the help she needed. Gus stories are one of my favorite genres in QaF and this is one of the best I've ever read. Hope to see more.
Deb
Author's Response:
Thank you, I love your stories too.
Date: Aug 08, 2016 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 13
Great story!
I like the epilogue giving us a glimpse how everyone was doing!
Thanks :)
Date: Jul 25, 2016 5:39 pm Title: Chapter 13
Sad that it's done already. :( Really enjoyed this. Everyone seems to be where they should be. Shame that Lindsey and Mel as still so self involved. Mel just giving up like she did and Lindsey being so busy with her socail life. seems like neither shoul've been bless with the gift of children.
Micheal.....whatever. spoiled little brat. what a whining self serving shit. Glad everyone has pretty much written him off. No one needs that kind of negative force in their lives.
Well done!!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jul 25, 2016 3:09 pm Title: Chapter 13
I feel bad for Gus and I love Brian and Justin parenting. It will interesting when JR interacts with them.
Date: Jul 25, 2016 5:39 am Title: Chapter 13
Beautiful story with lots of emotions and fun as well.
For the next, I would choose "Justin friend with Ben" first.
Thank you for entertaining us!
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2016 3:14 am Title: Chapter 13
You've ended this on a positive note. JR is happy with Ben and Brad. Lindsay has her used car dealer. Mel's back in Canada without her daughter. Even Mikey has a new guy, one that's completely gullible. All the foster children are doing well, as are Chad and Mia. Best of all Gus is in a safe place and happy.
Date: Jul 25, 2016 1:54 am Title: Chapter 13
Another fine story my friend! Thank you for sharing your wonderful work.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading my warped mind.
Date: Jul 25, 2016 1:39 am Title: Chapter 13
And now for my last review of the "Young, Old and Ridiculous:"
I LOVED that you had Gus update us on life as he sees it! Since he was the most affected by the issues presented, he seems fitting for him to have the last word. I'm so proud of him for not becoming a product of Mel and Lindsay's neglect or letting their assholery change the person he is becoming like it did to JR.
I'm glad that JR has shed her DLS persona and her 'parents.' Perhaps being with Ben and Brad will heal her in the long run and she and Gus can renew their relationship before she was turned into the mini-M&M that she was. Hopefully she'll go on to remain clean, sober and have a bright future.
I'm also glad that Delusional-No-More was not just a short-term moniker for Debbie but became an actual fact. It was past time that she stopped letting the rose-coloered glasses for her spineless and spoiled son rule her life! Even though Michael is in a new relationship (WHY STAR WHY? LOL), it is obvious that he hasn't changed or learned any life-changing lessons at all. Well I hope that his John is prepared to stay broke and invests in some top-quality earplugs. He'll need them! Meanwhile, I really hope Carl and Deb can get back to their lives but happy that they are taking it slow.
I don't blame Brian and Justin one bit for being still wary of Deb after a year. She did a lot of damage to them in the eight she was a shrew! But at least they are still willing to give her a chance, even if the relationship will never be as it once was. Perhaps after the mending, it will be stronger. I think Princess Mia will play a large role in that!
Well now it is time for the update regarding Slutty Felony and Horny Neglectful-Ass... It is a good thing that the toxic relationship has FINALLY met its end. Lindsay must be in her full glory even if the man she is now married to doesn't have as much money as Brian and Justin. She'll get to be a socialite and have dick-on-demand...or at least until the urge hits for her to carpet-munch. But then again as a sleazy used car saleman and a hetero dude, he might just be into that.
I'm not surprised that Melanie went back to Canada and no longer has anything to do with any of them. No one really knows her there or what she's capable of and now that Jenny isn't there, she is free to be who she wants to be and forget where she came from. I doubt that she is missed!
Well I am going to miss giving this running commentary of Who's Who is Asshole-ville! I am so looking forward to MORE of your work. You are an amazing writer who never fails to make me feel. Reading your work is not just a pleasure but a much-needed respite from my real life and writing adventures. And I thank you!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I won't leave you for long. I just wrote a chapter for an anti-michael fic.