Reviewer: mamaduck Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2016 3:50 am Title: Chapter 1

This is starting out very interesting.  Brian is going to go on the warpath and Mel is in his sites.

Great start on the story.  Sometimes the writing muse won't go to sleep.  Sending virtual chocolate to keep  it happy.

 

Sandy

Author's Response:

I was going to let Linds survive but I changed my mind. I really just thought this story up a few hours after my last one. I had it planned out and decided to go with it. It will get lighter.