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Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2016 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Cradle Rocking v. Cradle Robbing.

They need to talk to each other, they're both doing things that they think the other wants them to do - Justin having so much sex, even when he hurts, just because he thinks it will, please Brian - my heart :( or Brian not wanting to upset Justin, ahhh, if only they'd talk to each other.

IT'S POSITIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEEEEEEEEES!

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2016 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Maybe Baby, I Love You.

LMAO I am laughing so much at how sad I am that the test was negative. This is someone that doesn't usually read MPREG stories, and I'm all "BE POSITIVE BE POSITIVE..." LOL

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2016 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Rebirth.

Justin comparing their first time to that of Beauty and the Beast was BEAUTIFUL, and so perfect for their situation. But omg the guys "outside" scare me. Are they trying to fix Brian up? ahh

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2016 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Fusion and The Science of Sex.

How was this both hot and sweet all at the same time? Brian was so caring and sweet when it came to Justin's innocence. But the hand job was also HOT.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2016 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Hunger.

It is actually heartbreaking reading about Justin growing up alone, and doing every day normal things like Trick or Treat or Christmas by himself. I feel strangely proud with how well he's managing. And it's wonderful to watch him learn to like the touch of another human being. 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2016 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Turn Around Bright Eyes.

I was going to start talking about how Justin was only 14 and how scared he must be and the turmoil that must be going on inside Brian's brain- but I'll come to that. The last scene totally made my heart ache for poor Justin. The letters to Santa and how he takes a picture every day so his parents can see how he grew... that, that really got me.

I feel so sorry for Brian here, he knows he has to sleep with Justin, and he wants to, because it's Justin, and he's beautiful. But he knows the kid is now just 14, and about as innocent as they become :(

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2016 5:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Stealing My Life.

Oooooh this is very intriguing and not at all what I had expected when I started reading it. Poor Justin, he is so innocent, he's been hidden away and just craves human touch. Thank goodness, Brian is in there with him. He'll keep him safe.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2016 1:35 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Rebirth.

Brian and Justin did the deed.  Is Brian an author?  Love the bits about the cat.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2016 4:07 am Title: Chapter 4 - Fusion and The Science of Sex.

If Brian has his way Justin will get everything he wants.  Duchess is no longer his only friend.

Reviewer: tataniastorm Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2016 2:25 am Title: Chapter 18 - Gaining Freedom.

Ohhh loved this just wished we could have seen the reuion with the family and the birth of the twins. Ty for sharing.

Reviewer: Bella Donne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2016 6:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Stealing My Life.

I've read this a few times.  I think the first re-read was for comprehension, but the subsequent reads have been because I remember some original scene.  Some of those scenes are sad, some funny and some angering -- yet each stark. Thanks for writing!!

 

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2016 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Hunger.

So where is the kitty?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2016 3:23 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Turn Around Bright Eyes.

So sad that he had to order the presents that Santa should have sent.  That he celebrates his birthday alone.  He's only 14?  That means he was 9 when he was taken. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2016 1:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Stealing My Life.

This is an unusual AU and so sad. 

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