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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 25, 2018 3:33 am Title: Chapter 11

Pleease update



Author's Response: I working on the next chapter, thanks for being patient... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2017 3:13 am Title: Chapter 11

Just wondering when you will finish this ???



Author's Response: I know I'm behind on updating, hopefully in the next few weeks. Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2016 3:43 pm Title: Chapter 11

So glad the parents of Sam and Bobby are at least beginning to accept things and are welcoming of the boys

 

so glad that Justin is going to be able to surprise Brian... I do wish the girls would have been reprimanded for being so rude... judging him based on his clothes... mean girls LOL



Author's Response: I think Sam and Bobby's parents having found out, and then learning about their horrific experience. Having opened their hearts to all the changes, and love and accept them. It is pretty funny, Justin being able to shock them, teaching them not to be so judgemental of others. I think for once Justin might out due Brian on their anniversary. Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2016 11:39 am Title: Chapter 11

I bet those ladies in the art gallery feel really stupid now.  Can't wait for Brian's reaction to the anniversary gift.



Author's Response: Yes, no doubt they need to brush up on recognizing contemporary artists, especially if they're local. For once I think Justin will be the one surprising Brian. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2016 3:30 am Title: Chapter 11

I'm positive that Lindsay isn't thinking about what's best for Gus.  Melanie has improved.  Sam will need to see that Gus and Cole are there to mourn Bobby.  Justin and Brian both understand what being bashed does to you and might be of help.  Justin in the gallery was very interesting especially with the workers thinking him homeless.  When the truth comes out will they be embarressed.  Love the pictures you included.



Author's Response: I think Mel is trying to reconnect with Gus, while Lindsay is still pushing her authority. Grieving together, will help make their relationships stronger. It will be good for everyone, to talk through what they've all been through. Even after all these years, it seems that things haven't really changed much at all, homophobia still exist. Those girls should be embarrassed, I love those pics too... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2016 4:49 pm Title: Chapter 10

how scary, but i do wish they had called for help before they got out of the country... but I do get that fear can over rule good decisions.

just glad they are ok... and yay for Leda lol



Author's Response: Yes, Gus should have known that Brian would never judge him, and always come to his rescue. Thankfully Leda lives in San Diego, and took good care of them... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2016 2:25 am Title: Chapter 10

Oh God, how scary.  And to think one of the other kids was killed.  That's going to haunt Gus for a long time.  Good thing Cole has a level head.  Thanks for another chapter.



Author's Response: It's so hard experiencing something like this, losing a friend. It really brings home how even today with all the changes, homophobia still exist and you always have to keep your guard up. Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2016 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 10

WOW!!! What an experience for Gus and Cole! I feel bad that one of their newfound friends is dead. So sad to think that folks can't mind their own business and let people just be people.

As for Lindsay...of course she's going to make this situation all about her and her need to run Gus' life using an iron fist in a velvet glove. I'm glad that Gus is sticking to his own desires and not giving into the Head Muncher. 

So happy to see an update and looking forward to MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response: I know they had a horrific experience, but at least they have each other and they made their way to Leda's. Mel is starting to come around, but Lindsay is a different story. Just like she always wants to guilt Brian to her will, she trying to do the same with Gus. But over the years Brian has had Justin to show him her true motivations, and Gus is learning right along with his dad. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2016 6:56 pm Title: Chapter 9

I just don't get those 2 women. Not a abit. They have both been absolutely hainous towards poor Gus. for me, they behaviour is totally unforgivable. this fic I have to say has spiked my emotions! It's great!! :) I love it when a fic does that. Naturally being a parent, their behaviour sends me into orbit. lol.

Lindsey looking "fondly" on Brian saounds a bit ominous....

I'm glad Ted was there to shed some light onto the situation for Mel. Put things into perspective. He was much more gentle that I would've been that's for sure. She REALLY needs to get over the whole Brian thing, and learn to be grateful for all he's done. While seh recognises that she needs to apologize to Gus, she also knows she has issues with doing just that. Will she actually step up and do it properly? Or will she point fingers and try to blame Brian for some reason? Will Gus accept her apology? I think it will take taime. Both she and Lindsey have gone to far for either of them to be forgiven speedily. They have alot to do to prove themselves.

Was totally thrilled to see this update!! 

Cheers!

Elaine



Author's Response: Thanks Darling! What a great comment! I think they've both obsessed about Gus and their expectations for him to follow in Mel's footsteps, that they feel slighted by him choose a different path. The fact that Brian is supporting Gus's decisions, is only furthering their need to keep Gus under their thumb, treat him like a child trying to control him. Ted is trying to make Melanie see how controlling she become concerning Gus. Pointing out that he's a really a good kid, never causing trouble. After all he's almost nineteen, and she needs to let him spread his wings, instead of smothering him trying to make him a mama's boy... As for an apology, they need to acknowledge their behavior, and not just say they're sorry. What they've been doing is just deplorable. He needs love, understanding and support as he learns how to accept his positive status, and what he means to have to live with it for the rest of his life. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2016 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 9

I just want to smack those munchers!!!!  Leave Gus alone.  He's a smart boy.  If he wants to be an architect let him be one.  Thanks for posting this chapter.



Author's Response: Gus is very smart, and that's way it's so important for them to treat him as an adult, and with respect... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2016 8:14 pm Title: Chapter 9

I appreciate that Mel has FINALLY seen reason that Gus isn't a baby and can make decisions that don't have to be exactly what she wants.

I'm also so proud of Gus for standing up to her and even getting that little dig about relying on Brian's money lol



Author's Response: Mel really needs to thank Ted for putting things in perspective for her. Otherwise if she doesn't change her ways, she might loses Gus altogether... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2016 12:58 am Title: Chapter 9

It's a good thing they ate at Deb's rather then at the girls' house.  Just them and Gus would have been much worse.  Thank heavens for the voice of reason - Ted!  Great chapter.



Author's Response: Oh God! Can you imagine what a scene it would have been if it was just Lindsay and Mel, having dinner with Gus and Cole... I'm pretty sure they wouldn't have stayed long enough to eat... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2016 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 9

Glad that Gus is asserting himself and calling Mel on her shit. She needed to be told that she was acting like an asshole (Apologies to assholes everywhere for the insult to your questionable characters.. but I couldn't find a better term for the termagent with her head up her ass)! And Lindsay....here she goes again trying to play "Peaceful Lesbian in the Middle!" Either she stands with her child or she doesn't but make a decision already so that Gus can move on with or wthout you. I abhor flighty females and fair-weather family. Gus, Brian and Justin are surrounded by them in spades!

Great Update and Looking forward to MORE!!

HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response: Now that Gus is no longer living under their roof, it's easier for him to speak his mind and stand up for himself. I hope Mel takes Ted's advice, because they're coming close to losing Gus if they don't change their ways. Thankfully Gus has a strong support system, with Brian and Justin. After all Justin knows all about disapproving parents, and learning to let go... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2016 11:32 am Title: Chapter 8

I'm so angry with Lindsay, Mel, Michael, and JR.  I'm so glad that Gus has Brian and Justin in his corner.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response: Yes, with parents like Michael and Mel I doubt JR has a chance of developing maturity and understanding... Gus is lucky to have Brian and Justin, they're turning out to be a positive influence in his life... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2016 2:02 am Title: Chapter 8

JR and her asshole father need twin muzzles!! When I was growing up, my folks had the rule that "What goes on in this house, STAYS in this house!" Apparently Melanie and Lindsay only tended to force that rule in reference to Gus! The little witch's mouth needs to be sewn shut and then ducktaped. For the record, I suspect this 'outing' was done out of pure spite and jealousy. If she is anything like her father, any opportunity to be the center of attention will be taken at all cost, no matter the casualities in the goal of self-importance. 

Michael....That rat bastard really overcooked my grits this chapter!!! WHOOOOOO-WEE!!! The NERVE of that hypocritical guttersnipe, Michael! REALLY?!?! How dare he pull the 'Whore' card in reference to Gus' illness. I guess that he forgot that his husband and adopted son are ill with the SAME disease. I guess the fact that Ben got it from his unfaithful PARTNER doesn't matter much since it's obvious that people MUST whore in order to get it! Michael deserved to be PUNCHED IN THE MOUTH for that one!! I think that the Brian and Mikey show has officially ended and I can't say that I'm sorry in the least. Anyone who throws accusations around at a time like this- especially when they are hurled at the son of their supposed best friend- needs to be cut off well, truly and permanently. Gus doesn't need the negativity and neither does Brian and Justin.

Gus did the right thing in taking up his issues with the BITCH who birthed him. It's obvious that Lindsay is only hearing what she wants to hear but she can never say she wasn't TOLD that Gus isn't coming back into their house, nor does he WANT them to 'take care' of him. It was their supposed care that caused him to leave in the first place. He should just ditch the bitch and move on with his life; become successful at whatever he does and let Lindsay watch from the sidelines. Meanie and her get should become a non-factor from this point on since it's all about her anyway. Let JR find out what it's REALLY like to have Mel's full attention. Selfish trash hagbags the lot of them, including Michael (I still can't get over him...ASSHOLE!).

Looking forward to more of this!!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 



Author's Response: Twin muzzles, I love it... I guess they get it from Deb, she's never had a filter on her mouth always spouting advice off the top of her head. Mel and Lindsay live in a world of their own, denial, and power equals arrogance and stupidly... I like the idea of Brian's fist reconnecting with Michael jaw, maybe several times. Maybe he'll learn his lesson, probably not... Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sfscarlet Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2016 1:19 am Title: Chapter 8

GREAT UPDATE-  I love how you are giving everyone's perspective



Author's Response: Thanks so much Darling! I'm so glad you're enjoying this fic... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2016 12:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Michael is behaving like a typical idiot and he is a hypocrite to say that to Brian, Gus talking to Gus is a waste of time because as usual Lindsay only hears what she wants, JR had no right to tell anyone about Gus but I am not surprised she us acting this way, after all she is Melanie and Michael's child.

I think Gus referring to Mel and Lindsay by their names is perfect since they aren't exactly acting like his supportive parents.

Gus is not a child and he shouldn't have to conform to Mel or Lindsay's rules to be accepted or loved, Lindsay should know better because it didn't work when her parents tried it so why would it work with Gus?

Just Love that Brian and Justin are being so supportive of Gus and Cole plus they have Cole's parents to help, this is going to escalate before it even has a chance at getting better, due to the insensitivity, pettiness and cruelty of others who really should be more understanding.

The kittens names are cute and Brian will grow to like them or at least not want to drown them as long as they stay away from his Beloved Prada lol



Author's Response: Mikey! He'll never grow up and learn to filter his speech, he's always just reacting like the child that he is... JR is so out of line, blabbing about Gus's personal issues, like mother like daughter. Mel and Linz are just as hypocritical as Michael, they just can't see it. Brian and Justin truly understand what Gus is going through, having been so careful over the years when they we're still tricking. Kitties, I'm pretty sure Brian's always wanted pets, he just thinks it's a lesbionic thing... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2016 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 8

Arck!  Micheal is a fine one to talk.  I hope Ben hears about this and has a nice little discussion with him.  JR is taking after her father too much.  Love Gus' new name for Melanie.  lol.  Meanie. 



Author's Response: Yes, Mikey is truly an idiot, not even realizing the implications of his words, just reacting... It was a subconscious thing, losing the L in Melanie. But I like it, I think I'll continue having Gus use it,at least until she starts treating him like an adult... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2016 7:04 pm Title: Chapter 8

WTF... how hypocritcal of Michael... what an asshole and Lindsay is still being a total bitch..

 

Anthony and Cleopatra!!!! love them.. and why do I think Brian will fall in "tolerance" with them quickly too lol



Author's Response: Typical Mikey, speaking before he thinks, being the idiot that he is... Lindsay is still stuck in her Gus is my baby, not allowing him to actually grow up... I know, the kitties are so adorable, and yes Brian is bound to secretly love the little furballs... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2016 7:01 pm Title: Chapter 8

What a bunch of idiots these munchers and Novotnys...

So happy Gus is finally out of their grip and close to his father(s).



Author's Response: I think the girls are still in shock and denial about Gus's HIV status, and then there's the control factor. Mel's never been one to allow anyone to have more power than her, especially concerning her son, even though Brian is his father... After all this time she's still resentful about that fact... Brian and Justin have really stepped up to the plate, being there for Gus in every way possible... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2016 6:54 pm Title: Chapter 8

You knowI love you dearly right hun???

that was a TERRIBLE place to stop!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!! You're killing me!!! LOL

L&M are BITCHES!!!! JR, so far, seems like apoiled little brat who's been coddled far too much in life. And Michael. I have NO WORDS!!!!! Asshole doesn't begin to describe him! I can't wait for Ben and Hunter to find out what he said.....

(btw....the kittens are super cute)

Hugs!! Update REALLY REALLY quickly!!!!!!

cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response: You know I love you too Darling! Both Judy (my beta) and I have been on vacation so things are moving sloooow... Today's my last day in Maine, but it's a 20 hour drive back home. I've done a little writing, both "Kisses" and "Positive" so I'll be sending them off to Judy tonight... So more coming soon, kind of... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2016 9:25 pm Title: Chapter 7

I truly am loving this story.  I'm glad that Cole's parents seem to be very supportive.  Hope dinner with Ben goes well. 



Author's Response: Thanks, it makes me so happy you're enjoying this fic... Cole's parents are great, and even though they seems so different from Brian and Justin, they'll all grow to become very close... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2016 9:17 pm Title: Chapter 7

The girls having insisted that Gus be a lawyer was so rediculous.  An architect is perfect.  And Brian and Justin will back him up on that.  It's nice that Brian and Cole's dad went with them to their appointment.  Can just imagine how uncomfortable it would have been with Melanie or Lindsay.  Talking with Ben is a wonderful idea, but I agree that having Michael there would have the news spread faster than Michael could say "Maw!"



Author's Response: Oh God! I can just imagine Mel and Lindsay embarrassing Gus, what teenage boy wants to discuss his sex life with his mothers, it will be hard enough with their dads there... Ben will be a good support figure for them, helping them navigate all the changes and precautions they'll need to take... Michael, aaagggrrr... Can I just cut his tongue out now? Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2016 9:11 pm Title: Chapter 6

Love Brian telling Mel and Lindsay off.  It's amazing how easy it is to tell who's talking in this story.  I'm glad to hear that Cole's parents are okay with him being gay.  Wish the girls were as understanding.



Author's Response: Mel and Lindsay really had it coming after the way they reacted towards Gus. Cole's parents love him and want to be there for him as much as he'll allow. Granted their communication hasn't been the best in the past, but they're determined to change that... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2016 4:58 pm Title: Chapter 7

P.S. I hope Ben doesn't tell Michael that he is going to the Loft. Michael will SURELY invite himself to tag along after playing 50, 0000 questions with Ben. And I suspect that since Mel and Lindsay know, Debbie will sooner rather than later since they will need someone to be on their side so they can feel justified in their anger. And who better than the guilt-tripping  'Grandmother Hen' of young and old gay boys everywhere?? SMH 

~Nichelle



Author's Response: Thankfully Ben understands how emotionally devastating it is to come to grips with being positive, so he'll be careful not to let on to Michael. On the other hand, Mel might feel justified in telling Michael, or Debbie. After all she been in training for years as a gulit-tripping mother hen... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

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