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Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2019 8:55 pm Title: Chapter 20 ~ Commitments

Jamie is absolutely ADORABLE and so photogenic! I can see exactly why you chose that pic.

Poor, poor Lindsay (NOT) just can't handle the fact that she's not number one in Gus' life. If truth be told, she probably wasn't beyond getting breastfed and changed even as a baby. The fact that Gus loves spending time with his daddies should be a pleasure for her, yet instead she is stuck on loop of the 'Woe is Me' chorus. I don't trust that Ho, especially since Sidney had to let her go.

And now Keith is showing his controlling side, but does Michael get the message? NO! He's too busy basking in his fantasies of a perfect relationship, while still fantasizing about it being with Brian. You would think that he would have balked at the way Keith spoke about Michael's toys, he would have stood up for himself, right? I mean, when everyone else called him out on his obsession with them, he had diarrhea of the mouth even in reference to David. So shouldn't the fact that he's hurt, and at base scared, to say anything to Keith ring some alarm bells within that cemented brain of his? NO! Apparently NOT, since he just willingly went to bed with the asshole, even while he's being abused and told to shut up. And if that wasn't enough, he's burned and then ordered to fix breakfast because Keith is hungry, and THE IDIOT DOES IT!! Right then I would have started planning either my escape or Keith's murder. But no, not Michael! He's just too weak-willed and easily-influenced, even to save himself!

As for the rest of the guys, I'm so happy that they are moving on with their lives. They deserve all the happiness they can get!

HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2016 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 20 ~ Commitments

Looks like the cops have their eye on Keith.  That means trouble for Mikey.  The wedding plans are going to be so fun!!!! Love how this chapter started with Jamie! So sweet.



Author's Response: Thank God Josh is on the case, but it may not prevent Michael from being abused. Jamie is just adorable, and Justin and Em are having the time of their lives spending Brian's money, I mean planning the wedding... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

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