[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2019 9:24 pm Title: Chapter 22 ~ She Did What!
"Bad Moon Arisen" is RIGHT!!! Between Michael's chronic stupidity and Lindsay's idiocy, I don't know who is worse!
First, why did Deb- once AGAIN- have to involve Brian in Michael's lunacy? Why not have called Carl from the onset? I mean, she is dating a cop after all, right? And no one else would have been able to legally do anything, EXCEPT Carl who could have seen how Keith was keeping Michael prisoner in his home. But NO! She just had to call Brian, and for what? For Michael to still be the same hard-headed, stubborn asshole he's always been. Well it's no one else's fault but Michael's that he didn't listen, and Deb needs to stop running from pillar to post, trying to get everyone to solve his problem. He obviously was enjoying Keith's attentions... well, up until this last go round with him, right? Yeah, STILL NOT FEELING SORRY for Michael. Karma came back to bite him in the ass. As far as I'm concerned, Michael has been mentally and emotionally abusive for years to the people who were trying to save him from Keith; he just reaped what he sowed. The only good thing to have come out of the situation is that Keith is now dead, but... well, that's about all I can say there.
As for Lindsay... JESUS BE A PUNCH TO THE THROAT! Between the demands and outright LIES, I was angry. But for Gus and JR to pay the ultimate price for her GREED and NEGLECT has me enraged!! She deserves absolutely NO MERCY from anyone, especially the criminal justice system. Perhaps it's good that Lindsay is somewhere that she and the rest of the family can't lay hands on her. I really hope they throw the book at the bitch, and that she's introduced to Big Bertha and Big Mama in the worse ways possible!
My heart truly grieves for Melanie in this moment. I can't even imagine how she feels, even though you've written it splendidly.
HUGS (and tears for Mel and Jenny),
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2016 1:19 am Title: Chapter 22 ~ She Did What!
So much sadness in this chapter. Lindsay trying to pull a fast one on Maria and leaving the kids locked in the car! Gus in a coma and JR dead! Michael beat up. The only good thing is that Big Jack and Keith won't be bothering anyone ever again.
Author's Response: Yes, I forgot how tragic this chapter was. It seems I was on a killing spree, although Big Jack and Keith deserved what they got... Later Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Aug 07, 2016 3:59 am Title: Chapter 22 ~ She Did What!
Really upsetting and emotional chapter.
But still a great story
Author's Response: I know, I may have gone to far this time. I'm glad you're still enjoying it... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
Date: Aug 06, 2016 7:40 pm Title: Chapter 22 ~ She Did What!
Wow, what a dense chapter!!
Lindsey was out of her mind and the result is tragic.
Brian is not going to forgive her.
Author's Response: It's true Lindsay has hit the tipping point, and it's all downhill from here... Later Darling ~ Kathleen