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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2016 9:23 pm Title: Chapter 3

What a nightmare this Michael and such a liar!!!

 

Reviewer: cakdg Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2016 7:07 am Title: Chapter 3

RL butted in and I haven't been able to access internet for a few weeks (that shouldn't ever be allowed to happen to addicts like me), but happily I can now continue with your lovely stories and boy do I have a lot to catch up on... I can't wait!  

Mikey is such a child, even in front of other children.  His jockeying for position beside Brian in the car and at the diner...well, my sigh of exasperation would have parted his hair.

The little girls are adorable and the solidarity the kids have with the different parents in regards to food is cute and true to life in my experience.

The two conversations that Mel had with Michael about JR in the same day...I wonder how many times she's regretted that he is the father.  I will never understand that decision, ever.

The last line, LOL

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2016 2:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

I hope Mel didn't think Brian was trying to shirk his parenting duties.. I dont think so, only Lindsay has that delusion 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2016 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 3

Gotta say you give us some great fun watching Lindsay and Michael make asses of themselfs.



Author's Response:

I try hard to be nice but then they start talking and my typing goes crazy. LOL

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2016 4:29 am Title: Chapter 3

Where to start??? The logical place would be Sargeant Pain in the Ass, of course. But since my diatribe is still building in that regard, let's start with Captain Pain in the Ass aka Lindsay....

Where does this bish get off? She is the epitome of invasive, jealous and spiteful. Where exactly is HER career? This trick can't even keep a job but she knows what's best for Justin's?? REALLY?? I think that she was depending on Brian and Justin saying 'YES Lindsay, raise OUR kids and we'll give you more money in child support so that you won't ever have to work again.' WRONG Trick-enda!! Dead wrong! So now she is determined to make Justin 'see' that he can't have it all- the man, the money, the family and the career.  If she put half as much effort into finding a job as she does into sticking her long, pointy nose into Brian and Justin's business where it is both NOT wanted or NEEDED, the bitch could be rich (well eventually). 

Now for that Whiny Whimpy Sargeant PAIN in the Ass named Michael: This mofo right here is the most spoiled, selfish and self-centered asshole EVER! To yell in a restaurant with kids present, including HIS, all for the sake of being the center of attention is probably the most trifling, asinine....LAWD HAM TURKEY!!! That punkass needs to be CHOPPED in the THROAT for real!!! Why didn't Deb do that? WHYYYY??? Please, PLEASE let someone do that before this fic is over! And then to lie to Melanie so that he could pawn his daughter off on his scheduled weekend all so he could manipulate Brian (or try to) into doing what HE wanted is the exact reason why that waste of sperm should NEVER have been allowed to reproduce....EVER!!!

I'm glad that Ben and Mel seem to be getting a clue, albeit a rather miniscule one right now. I'm glad that Mel called Justin to verify all of the bullshit lies that Michael was spouting and that she nipped Lindsay's plan to join Michael in his ignorance- for once. One can't fix Stupid or Crazy and The P.I.T.A. Foundation is totally corrupted! SMH

Looking forward to more of this playing out!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

I might have to steal PITA. Justin could really get creative with it. Thanks for cheering me on.

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