Date: Sep 26, 2016 11:08 am Title: Chapter 8
What a bunch of immature jerks these 2. Lindsay obviously knows all about style and art and Michael is a very responsible father.
Glad that Mel is not left alone and that B&Justin are as strong as ever.
I loved that Oreos gift.
Date: Sep 17, 2016 6:22 am Title: Chapter 8
When are Mel and Lindsay finally going to end it. I don't think counseling at this late date is going to be of benefit, especially when one of the partners is a budding stalker and neither recognizes it.
Michael, drop in dad extrordinaire. I'd feel sorry for JR (I hate that moniker, it always makes me think of junior or JR Ewing - and for anyone not in the know, there was this evening soap opera in the latter half of the prior century called Dallas, this character was an oil magnate, who was an asshole and eventually got shot) except that the less exposure she has to him has to be better for her.
I'm disappointed that Ben didn't and continues not to see through Michael's machinations. Or maybe he doesn't want to see?
Ted is so gaga over Austin, I'm glad.
The drop in dad is suing for custody and he thinks B/J will support him. He really has gone to NeverNeverland. He should buy real estate and stay there.
That Lyndsay feels she can horn in everywhere in Justin's life is appalling. Glad she got no satisfaction from Reed and it's a good thing Justin and Peter talked about what the true boundaries should be regarding Lynsday.
Where is JR? Drop in dad strikes again and this is going to help his custody hearing how? What a moron.
Great chapter.
Date: Aug 14, 2016 7:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
I think Michael is in for a rude awakening with ANGRY Brian... he better watch out!
Date: Aug 04, 2016 1:44 am Title: Chapter 8
I take it Michael is going to get his ass handed to him in court? And Ben will find out about the stalking and kick his butt to the curb (or Deb's House).
Lindsey need a different hobby and a job.
Date: Aug 04, 2016 12:15 am Title: Chapter 8
<Sitting here humming old Negro Spirituals> I do that whenever idiocy begins to piss me off.... The PITA Foundation has really been working on my nerves. OHHHHHHH if I could fold myself into the creases of this story, I would strangle both of them and that gaudy orange jumpsuit be damned!
The absolute NERVE of Lindsay making 'suggestions' and expecting them to be taken and followed. Instead of working on her partnership, she is constantly trying to interfere with a successful one. This level of harassment goes so far beyond wanting Justin to succeed that it has become the ugly sides of jealousy and envy! Seriously, Brian and Justin NEED to take out a restraining order on the bitch! I LOVED the way Reed handled Lindsay! And apparently he also speaks WASP...in fact he speaks well-educated, highly-qualified WASP where as Lindsay just came out looking like a pretentious harridan. As for Peter, I think it's time that the gloves come off when he's dealing with Lindsay. Out of respect for Justin and therefore Brian, he hasn't gone off on her yet. I think it's past time that he does!!
And Michael's peanut-headed ass...REALLY SIR?? A custody hearing? On what grounds?? Mel didn't 'Neglect' the kids- that was his and Lindsay's forte. And then to call himself slick by picking Jenny up from school at 2 without calling ANYONE to verify that he had her!! Well now THAT is irresponsible! Justin, who was supposed to pick her up, could have thought anything had happened to her and called the police. If he hadn't had the presence of mind to ask the school what was happening, it could have gone a whole other way. I am sooooooooooooo looking forward to seeing how Brian deals with his stupid, stalking ass 'best friend.' Hopefully Ben will get his head out of his ass and start looking for some good hard truths regarding his childish husband.
Lindsay and Michael need reality checks post-haste and I CAN'T WAIT to watch them be delivered!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I normally have an ending in mind what I write, but this one seems to want to keep going. So unfortunately, you'll have to suffer the petulant twosome for a while. LOL
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2016 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
As always a great chapter. Love how you put Lindsay in her place and am looking forward to seeing what you do with Michael. Poor JR.
Author's Response:
JR is really smart at five. She has a small part but I think she tells it to Brian the best. Thanks for reading.
Date: Aug 03, 2016 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 8
So once again Lindsey is assuming herslf into other's business. Between Reed and Peter, she's going to really burn her bridges with justin and of course Brian. I can never get over what a high opinion she has of herself!!
I'm glad for Mel's sake that they are "taking a break" Maybe teh councellingwill help them, but until she sees things for how theyrelly are, I don't hold out much hope for them. Poor mel seems to be having to handle the whole custody battle withour Lindsey so far. If Lindsey she's going to be hit right between the eyes if this goes to court. Like I said, I kind of hope it dies. It would be pretty funny in some says. both Micheal adn Lindsey having all their skeletons brought out for all to see. I can't see Lindsey's mother being at all happy with it. Doesn't make for a good public image with the country club set.
I have to say though.please write FAST!!!!!!! I'm dying to see how brian confronts Michael now!! LOL. Ben has been completely snowed by Michael and he needs all teh right info. I think he's going to have everything or at least many things brought out to the light of day. The fact that Michael has still been stalking Brian when he's supposed to have been looking after his daughter. And what's with him taking JR out of school early? and then getting her picked up? Again...won't bode well for anything in court. Justin is right, that she has to be the bad guy here. The real truth has to come out adn feelings need to be put aside. This is her child, not a toy to fight over. Michael doesn't seem to get that. His world is filled with comics and superheros. He thinks Brian is going to be on his side and fight his battles for him. HA! boy...is that going to shock th shit out of him!
Will await the next update!! all your fics are great! I'm so glad you are contributing so much for us all to enjoy. I'm definitely n teh corner of making this longer than the others. :) I'm just greedy that way. lol
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
I just finished the next update and it was hard, I couldn't control Brian. It sold be up soon.