Date: Sep 26, 2016 1:17 pm Title: Chapter 15
I love how Justin takes care of Brian's resolutions...
Glad to see some help coming to the rescue.
Date: Sep 19, 2016 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 15
Well, now we know how Michael got the key to the loft. It's good that they all know, so that it won't happen again.
I commiserate with both Brian and Justin regarding how to deal with Lindsay. Justin wants to let her have it and Brian wants to protect his family from the crazy person.
I'm glad Peter is coming down with a security expert, they badly need advice from an outside party.
After meeting Max I'm seeing some of Justin's and Lindsay's earliest interactions in a different light. And with the reevaluation, I'm equally concerned.
On to the next...
Date: Aug 14, 2016 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ok, I never thought of Linds as harmful, but even this is starting to sway me too
Date: Aug 08, 2016 4:27 pm Title: Chapter 15
The thought of Lindsey adn Justin is just ...EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEW!! I'm trying to figure out if she thinks she's a better agent for him or a better partner. I'm guessing both. That she assumes she can be there for him professionally and personally. Sadly it's all about her though. She sant's to further Justin's career, or be by his side personlly only to benefit her. so that SHE can be seen in teh right places and live the kind oflife she seems to think she's owed.
Intersting way you portrayed Lindsey in this. You used actual canon material to begin the stalking and then had her twist it to make her seem like the super stalker. I honestly never would have thought of it that way. Well done!! She is however freaking ne out even more as is Max. Everything he adn Brian are saying to Justin is so legit! the manipulations she chick had right from the start is scary!!
Off toread more!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Aug 08, 2016 2:12 am Title: Chapter 15
Omg Lindsay is seriously psycho... she's way beyond obsessed with Justin and his career. Obviously delusional as well...as if Justin would abandon Brian and their kids to live with her in New York and have kids with her! That rant of hers to Ted was both frightening and hilarious. Nice job and can't wait to see how this turns out😊
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2016 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 15
Looks like Ted was right. Lindsay is on the crazy train. Love this chapter and can't wait to see what you have planned next.
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2016 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 15
The Crazy Train has left the building!!! Lindsay is seriously PSYCHO- and not only in the Norman Bates seeing his dead mom kinda way! I laughed out loud when Justin called her 'Ms. Plans' because that's exactly what she is... a scheming, planning, insane chick. I don't even think medication will fully help her at this point. Ted's reactions also made me laugh hard! Part of me really did want Justin to go in there and tell her to go to Hell wearing a gasoline catsuit and jumping on a pogo stick, but I also see the wisdom of Brian keeping Justin out of her reach. It was a very smart move to call Peter and therefore Max.
You did an excellent job of weaving 'suspect' canon event seamlessly into the original storyline! WTG! Your gift is AMAZING!!
WRITE On, Star!!!
~Nichelle