Date: Oct 02, 2016 3:23 pm Title: Chapter 18
Ah ah ah... Lindsay and Michael exchange: poor dumb asses. So funny how the hate each other.
What's not funny, is how Lindsay becomes more and more addicted to Justin.
Date: Sep 19, 2016 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 18
I get Brian's need to vent, but he has to remember this meeting with Lindsay was just a means to an end. He got custody Gus, mission accomplished. I'm sure Justin will know just what to do when Brian gets home.
The bitchfest between Michael and Lindsay was funny and Michael of all people to mention a restraining order was hysterical!
Date: Aug 14, 2016 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 18
Brian's best moment of his life.... OMG, that was the it right there... oh the Feels!!!!!
Date: Aug 09, 2016 4:40 pm Title: Chapter 18
A part of me wanted to reach through and shake Justin. I know he's trying to make excuses for Lindsey's behavior, but he NEEDS to face facts! He seems to be hemming and hawing about what to do...reluctant to take further steps. but he has kids and they have to take precident. I know he knows that, and they are his 1st priority, I just think there was a bit of denial there. I do think he's finally at the point that he's realizing the level of delusion that Lindsey is really at. I think he just didn't want to believe that Lindsey would ever do something to hurt him, but sadly, if left to her own devices, she will go to any length to get what she wants.
Let's face it....the girl is certifiably frigging NUTSO!! off the rails!
I must say the confrontation between Lindsey an dmicheal was hilarious!! Not what i was expecting. It was a much needed comic relief after teh stress of the previouc chapters I must say!! LOL I was actually sitting outside on the curb near my place having a ciggy (can't smoke of teh condo property AT ALL) laughing out loud. Must say I think I turned a acouple of heads. LOL. It was too funny though! funny how just the suggestions of a (or rather another) restraining order had her do an about face and leave. Was relived as any plan between those to could either be really dangerous or ridiculously funny.
Now michael is off to have a non exixtant meeting with Brian. He just can't get his head around the fact that Brian is serious. He seems to think that brian will just get over it and as always, forgive him. Don't think that's going to happen anytime soon.
Can't wait for MORE!!!!!!!!!!
cheers,
Elaine
PS...btw...I completely agree with Nicole about and ending. don't force it, let it come naturally. If it goes on for awhile, let it. Enjoy the process, enjoy how your characters are going. We all appreciate and vastly enjoy this story!
E
Date: Aug 09, 2016 11:23 am Title: Chapter 18
Poor Linds has lost it. I see a long rest in her future. Michael on the other hand is perfectly sane just an idiot. I see a bit of a rest in his future too. That difference is crucial -- while we are shocked at both it is only appropriate to laugh at Michael. That's part of what makes your writing good you make your readers feelings a part of the process whether it's laughter or sadness. All authors attempt it but achieving it is difficult.
Again, loving it, thx for writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for giving me a reason to keep writing.
Date: Aug 09, 2016 3:59 am Title: Chapter 18
I'm so glad her oh so brilliant plan is failing miserably.
Date: Aug 09, 2016 3:58 am Title: Chapter 18
Huzzah another chapter!
But for dang what the actual fudge! Wasn't sure I could swear so temperred it a bit....Husband seriously husband!!! And poor Brian forever blaming himself and Ted is just so squdgeable. L&M need to check themselves although we know they are going to wreck themselves cannot wait for how the aftermath plays out...though have to admit the d&t sniping insults had me snarfing into my wine!
This is so good I do this👊🿠and grab myself a glass of ðŸ·after doing a widdle happy dance.
And I have to admit that some of the reviews are as good as this fic...
Author's Response:
I totally agree with you on the review their a story on there own. Thanks for reading.
Date: Aug 09, 2016 2:32 am Title: Chapter 18
The argument between the PITA Foundation was EPIC and I am still laughing!! Both of them are complete and utter assholes BUT I'm glad that Lindsay is not finding the ally she thought she would in Michael. For once his vitriol comes in handy. And now the idiot is on his way to the Diner to wait in vain- and not the Bob Marley kind either! LMAO!
As for Brian, my heart really went out to him. I LOVE reading and writing about the many facets of Brian Kinney and it's good that through this story, Ted is discovering some too. I'm really happy that Ted was there for him with some sage advice and that he also talked to Justin, giving him the real deal about Lindsay's ramblings. I hope that Justin will remind Brian that "people cause their own pain" and Michael and Lindsay aren't any different; just deranged in their own rights.
Ms. Plans and Mr. Pathetic are surely about to get their comeuppance and I CAN'T WAIT!!!
WRITE On, Star!
~Nichelle
P.S. A little advice from one author to another: I know that you were concerned about not being able to see the ending in sight. Keep in mind that a story will ALWAYS let you know- although some authors don't follow that edict. That said, keep calm about it and although you may outline (those are good for plot points but you still have to allow for the dialogue to go where it needs to), allow the next chapter to flow through you. Trust me, with all the twist and turns; the delicate weaving of the plot that you have placed into this sixth fic of yours (Good Golly Miss Molly- SIX ALREADY?!), no one is getting bored or feeling like this is going on too long. Keep Writing until 'it' tells you that it's the end, Darling! As long as it's thoroughly engaging, entertaining, well-written and brings about a satisfying resolution, who cares what length it is! You're doing a WONDERFUL job! *HUGS!*
[Report This]Date: Aug 09, 2016 2:14 am Title: Chapter 18
Crazy people. Perhaps a vacation is in order.