Reviewer: cakdg Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2016 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 19

Talk about creating revisionist histories, Lindsay and Michael are certainly special snowflakes!

Kudos to Ted for trying, but it is a lost cause.  Mikey only hears what he wants to.

I'm glad Max is there.  No telling what Lindsay would do to any of them if she felt thwarted enough.

Great POV's!

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2016 3:40 pm Title: Chapter 19

The trouble with going into the minds of Lindsey and Michael, I'm not so sure there's a way out....... YIKES!! I can't help thinking of all the stalkers that many celebrities have and to what great lengths they go to. Your trip into the thoughts of these to is rather.........Scary as hell!! LOL. Very disturbing to say the least.

Now...getting to Ted...woohoo!! He was awesome!! What he said was perfect. Sadly it fell on deaf ears. It's amazing how someone can hear the same thing, from a variety of people, go as far as receive a restraining order, yet can't see the reality of it. It's far beyond making excuses. He really is in a state of delusion. Not sure if it's as scary as Lindsey mind you, but incredibly disturbing. I think he's more along the line of how we normally see him. Immature, can't face reality...perpetually seeing Brian in his youth. I think it may be more like he's scared of the changes Brian has made. Yes. he's obsessed with him, is blind to the changes Brian has made or that he really loves Justin, but I wonder if Michael has simply conviinced himself that Brian doesn't mean any of it out of fear of everything changing around him. Many talk of Brian's fear of change, but I think Michael is just as guilty of it. He's just taking it to a totally different level. Far more extreme. He can't differentiate being best friend kind of love to being in love. He's not mature enough to know teh difference.

Lindsey..............HO-LY SHITABLLS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  OK, now before she was just pissing me off. NOW...she's scaring the hell out of me!! I know she's gong to get her cumuppence at some point....but when exactly??? To what lengths will she actually get to before she's stopped and how will she be stopped...so many questions and so few answers! ARGH!!!!!! Each update is a thrill, yet by the time I'm finished reading...I'm at an even higher emotional state whether it be anger, frustration of just plain spooked. Damn...you are good!!

So will anticipate this next chapter....You know when you watch a movie and it's at the scary part...you close your eyes but still peak out between your fingers. That's kind of how each update is for me. LOL. Freaked out as to what M or L will do next, yet can't not look to see. :)

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!

cheers,

Elaine

Author's Response:

I promise to limit your med levels LOL 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2016 3:37 am Title: Chapter 19

Ted actually made me HOT!! WHOO!!! Him telling off Michael was one of the GREATEST Ted moment I have EVER read!! It was so damn overdue!! WHOO!! His comparison of Michael and Lindsay to cockroaches was so accurate! Only when the light is turned on, the human vermin don't seem to scatter like the six legged variety. Too bad there isn't a human form of Raid called "Bitch Be Gone" but then again.....

Captain Pain in the Ass is violating the restraining order, I think, isn't she? Even being at the school where Gus and JR go to, violates that, right? I can't remember if I read that part when Max was explaining the rules of the restraining order to her but I think that it said anywhere they (Brian, Justin and Mel) are most likely to be, she SHOULD NOT be. Someone really needs to call the Pittsburgh Paddywagon for that PITA! I mean, how delusional does she have to be for someone to put her out of her OWN misery?? LOL I know that you can't fix stupid or crazy but DAMN, where is an icy flight of steps when he needs one? He could always say she slipped...LOL

Sargeant Pain in the Ass.... Sargeant Pain in the Ass....SARGEANT PAIN IN THE ASS!!! I swear fo' cheese it was like Ted had NOT even spoken! How many people have to tell the little sloth that Brian doesn't want him around? There is a restraining order which prohibits the asshole from being within 500 yards of Brian, Justin, the kids AND their businesses. What part of GET LOST is he not understanding? Well we KNOW how that is going to end up if he goes to Babylon, which he undoubtedly will Cunty Crusty Cretin that he is...My OH MY how I will enjoy his downfall! 

 

WRITE On, Star!!

~Nichelle

Author's Response:

Love your reviews. Thank you for entertaining me between chapters.