Reviewer: cakdg Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2016 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 20

Poor Justin, you gotta empathize.  He has to curtail his life because Lindsay isn't capable of living in the real world.

LOL, I'm with Brian, run over the two of them at the same time, he's got insurance and any publicity  would probably help his art sales. <g>

I think Max is reading both Michael and Lindsay correctly.  Michael is in a waiting game, he has been for 2 decades and probably will be for the next 2, not so silently pining.  Like he deserves Brian for having waited all those years.

Drat! Too bad the police were too slow getting to Lindsay...it will happen, she can't help herself.

Giggle, I knew Michael would violate the restraining order, I just thought he would go to the house or Kinnetik.  Couldn't happen to a nicer guy.

Another great chapter, on to the next...

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2016 4:41 pm Title: Chapter 20

Is it bad that I'm a bit relived that this was a less traumatic chapter? lol. I was pretty much able to breath calmly while reading this. 

what an aweful position that  Justin is in. Can't even go to the store on his own. Any choice has been taken out of his hands. Glad he's sticking to it though and not rebelling. That he's realizing it's for teh safey of his family....the kids. If it was just about him and he was on his own and with or without Brian, I think he's say "Fuck you" adn go anyway, screw teh repercussions. Glad he's keeping a good head on his shoulders here. Shame Lindsey left before teh cops arrived. Not sure if she did it knowlingly, or if she just left cause the kids had, and Justin wasn't there. Not sure what she'll try to do next...hope she gets caught though, adn soon. She's dangerous! I don't mind teh threat of something happening, but having them actually taken, kidnapped or what have you is torture!! 

Michael however.........well, all I can say is 1 down....1 to go. He's such an idiot! Max's description however was right on the money though I think. He's not really a threat to anyone physically, he's just selfish enough that he's an ass. He has no one to blame but himself. I'm curious if he'll ever learn or is he in a state of perpetual immaturity? Will he finally figure out that Brian is really really freigging serious and that he needs to stay away or will he still try to call? I can't believe that he went to Babylon having every intention of confronting Brian there. *sigh*....pathetic, idiotic, delusional...there's a word and I just can't think of it.

I think all are on the same page now as far as understanding how Michael and Lindsey work. They mindsets and goals.

Another brilliant chapter!! I guess you spoiled us previously with sometimes giving us 2 chapters a day. one in teh day adn 1 at night...I keep looking thorughout the day. lol. I guess work MUST come first. I get it. mine too. fortuately I'm at a desk in my own office, so I can cheat adn peek, and indulge my reading addiction here and there thoguhout the day.

Looking forward to tonights episode!! (will I need mes for this one?? lol)

Cheers!!!!!!

Elaine

Author's Response:

Get the meds for the chapter after the next one. LOL.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2016 3:41 am Title: Chapter 20

While Michael is cooling his dancing feet off in jail, they should also give him a 'DUNCE' cap and sit his dumb ass in a corner...then make him write 1000 times, 'I will STAY my stupid ass AWAY from Brian and Justin... I will STAY my stupid ass AWAY from Brian and Justin.' Perhaps using an old grade school method, in the simplest terms, will teach the FOOL to STAY his ass AWAY from Brian and Justin since apparently if it isn't written in comic strip form it doesn't register. Defintely enjoyed that scene!!

I also enjoyed Mel's talk with Max. I think she now has a clearer understanding of how Lindsay mentally unraveled right before her eyes. Sometimes there are key instances that tend to be overlooked in the moment but when taken as a whole, paints a much different picture. Sadly, that had a trickle down theory with Justin too.

Poor Justin! My heart certainly went out to him this chapter! It's one thing if you have to go to the grocery store and don't want to but it's an entirely different thing to have to go and can't- at least not without an escort. That has to feel completely overwhelming and all because a chick went Cookoo for Coco Puffs. Lindsay may need medical attention but she also needs a knock in the head with a cinderblock! I completely agree with Brian that Justin should wait for Michael and Lindsay to in the same place before he runs them over with his car. Sure he would never do it, but THAT fantasy is definitely one worth having!!

WRITE On, Star!

~Nichelle 

Author's Response:

I starting to think I write just because of the reviews, LOL. It’s like reading a story, with in my story. I love everyone joining in my crazy mind. Thank you for making me laugh, when things get scary with my characters.