Reviewer: cakdg Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 20, 2016 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 22

I'm glad that B/J and kids got away.  They all needed it.

Another stint in jail and is it possible...has Michael finally bought a clue?

I had to laugh at Lindsay wanting real gifts at her wedding this time around.  If she wasn't thinking of marrying Justin, I could sympathize with her remembering that fertility statue or whatever it was that Michael/Ted got her and Mel.

Justin was bound to do something that didn't fit in with her fantasy.  Now that has happened and so publicly, what will she do?

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2016 1:11 am Title: Chapter 22

OH LAWD MAKE ME OVER....these two mofo here.....They have me over here rewriting the Negro Spiritual "Come on in the Room" to say You gon need a doctor to write out ALL yo' scriptions and give you a SHOT for medicine in the Room!" This is a dual review so bear with me....LAWD!!!

 The Pain in the ASS posse is REALLY tipping over the scales of assholery! First there is Michael...WHY LAWD WHY?!?!?! <insert another face palm HERE> If it wasn't already BAD enough...This mofo right here gets released from jail and heads where?? Not HOME where he should be locked away until he grows a brain but to the Diner to accost Ted and Emmett for not helping his miserable bastardy ass out of jail. Blake's assessment was entirely correct and YET the punkass decides to challenge the truth of what Blake said. And how does he do that? By pouting like a petulant three year old who thinks that he can whine everyone into submission. Game, Set, Match Blake WINS!! Then if that is NOT enough...he goes to Kinnetik anyway intent on getting to the person who had his DUMB ASS arrested in the first place....If it were me instead of Carl, I would have taken his ass straight to the hospital for a mandatory 48-hour psyche eval followed immediately by enforced incarceration at the Allegheny Psychaitric Home for Deliquent Adults (there isn't any such place but it sounds just as good as Shady Pines, LOL)! Do I think his moment of enlightement will last?? Maybe but I hold out NO HOPE! He just isn't capable of getting healed from his Brian addiction. An addict has to want help and can we all really see Michael wanting it?? Just saying...

As if dealing with one Insane Idiot isn't enough we STILL have good ol' Lindsay to take up arms in the Asshole Department. This bitch here is outright dangerous. There is no worse Nut than a SMART NUT (see Timothy McVey, Jeffrey Dalhmer, Charles Manson, Lavinia Fisher- who was the first female serial killer in history). Telling Nancy that she and Justin were to be married was just..... just...... This is wayyyyyyyyy BEYOND delusion or wishful thinking; this is downright scary. The fact that Nancy bought into Lindsay's lies shows just what a weeak-willed and unvigilant parent she has always been. Most parents, ESPECIALLY mothers can tell when their children are lying but in her desperation for Lindsay to want 'Tom,' 'Dick' or 'Harry's' pecker, she is willing to believe and do ANYTHING!! Jennifer should run into Nancy and tell her what an absolute cwazy cock-confused cookoo, weenie-wanting still-wesbian Lindsay has become. Perhaps not only will Nancy get a clue but she will be forewarned before her stalking, psychotic offspring makes the news.

As for Lindsay's viewing of the interview: should she really be surprised that she wasn't mentioned AT ALL! Why would Justin want everyone to know that he was in a sense stabbed in the back by someone he once considered a friend who is NOW the bane of his existence? I swear if this was a cartoon, I would happily drop an anvil on her head... or in this case a LARGE fist doused in some Holy Water to knock the sense into her... But as mad as I am at her, I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

WRITE On, Star!!!

~Nichelle

Author's Response:

I love your review it makes me want to let Linds escape. LOL  I forsee a long future in a hospital for Linds at the end. Thanks for staying on crazy train with me. 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2016 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh snap!! Lindsey is PISSED!!!!!!!! Oh man...what's she gonna try to do know? An angry stalker is all kinds of bad. She was already scary, how she who knows what she's capable of. And Poor Justin has no idea that hisinterview will have caused her to become even more unhnged. So many twists adn turns in this! I get an idea that you're going to go one way...then wammo...you take a different turn. So exciting!

OMG........has michael had a break through?? Has he finally realized just how far he's gone? Can we trust this sudden enlighenment adn will it last or will he once again make expalnations for his behavior? 

Another chapter!! Fan frigging tastic! thrilled beyond belief. thank you thank you thank you!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Author's Response:

I kind of scared myself with the end of the next chapter. Just peep between your fingers at the last line. LOL