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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2016 9:13 pm Title: Chapter 2

Kyle's first view of the diner is pretty funny (I love the warnings Emmett and Deb gave Kyle about Brian and Justin).

And this is my favorite part:
“Emmett, if you're imagining Justin and Brian, I don’t keep you busy enough.” Drew Boyd tells Emmett. How many famous people come here?
“Drewsy, if you kept me any busier, I’d be in traction.” Emmett starts kissing Drew.
“Okay knock it off, you're just encouraging Brian.” Debbie tells Emmett.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2016 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 2

I hope Kyle actually fits in well with the group... he seems nice enough.. don't cross any lines buddy!!!!

Reviewer: Qaf4Lyfe Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2016 9:35 pm Title: Chapter 2

Interesting can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response: Just posted it. I have two more that I'll post later today

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2016 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 2

LOL! Kyle certainly will be getting quite the education while he's on assignment in Gay PA. The question is just how much of one will he get? Also I kinda wonder what 'Foot-In-Mouth" will say and if any old boyfriends/conquests of Brian and Justin will willingly fill in the blanks for the reporter. Babylon, the Boyz and one Bulldog reporter will make for some truly great reading!

WRITE On, Star!

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Most is going to be the reporter just trying to keep up. 

Reviewer: NoChaser Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2016 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh, this chapter is SO in character for the guys, and especially for Deb. 

I have to say I'm in awe of your prolific story-telling. I hit refresh a half dozen times a day to see if anything new has been added. LOL.

Can't wait to see where this one ends up. Great job on your stories, by the way. 

 



Author's Response:

This on is just going to be them having fun and having an outsider see what there like. I needed something lighter after the last one.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2016 2:58 pm Title: Chapter 2

It appears Kyle's made a good start.  Emmett is talking to him, anything Em says won't be detrimental to Justin.   Debbie's invited him to a meal on Sunday.  Now it just depends on how he writes his story.



Author's Response:

Poor Kyle he just wants to write a story, instead he's gonna get mixed up with all of them.

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