Date: Aug 17, 2016 7:50 pm Title: Chapter 9
I think Gus hitting on Kyle continuously is so fabulous... reminds me of Hunter always after Brian LOL
Date: Aug 17, 2016 7:47 pm Title: Chapter 9
This is soooooo good!!
I love how you describe Brian and Justin still into each other that much and how they asked the other one to get married.
The exchanges between Gus, Kyle, Brian and Justin are delightful (Justin realizing he's becoming like his parents).
We got a small "talk" joke.
Date: Aug 16, 2016 4:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
HA! Such fun!! Love that I'm smiling through all the updates, giggling at times. Poor Kyle is in the thick of it now. LOL. good thing they all seem to be accepting him. This continual tennis match is so entertaining!!
gus is a little minx! Mischevious little shit ain't he?! Between trying to hit on Kyle and getting his little sister in trouble....you sure can tell he's a Kinney, with a heap of Justin thrown in via osmosis. :)
Michael is still a whiner but in a fairly innocent way. Still acts like he's 12 at times, but I guess it's just who he is, and the group have learned to deal with it.
LOVED the ending of this chapter! So sweet!! Big assed smile on my face!
Kyle is going to have one hell of a story from all of these guys! His editor is hopfully going to love every installment.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Aug 16, 2016 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
This is so much fun. Again, it's fresh and original with a wicked sense of humor, like your other stories. So we're up to two weddings-- I wonder if there will be three? And, I wonder if they'll be an article or a book... lol.
[Report This]Date: Aug 16, 2016 11:24 am Title: Chapter 9
PS you also take the points that bothered me most about the series and address them.
[Report This]Date: Aug 16, 2016 11:15 am Title: Chapter 9
You have the best dialogues. Do the characters talk in your head and you just write it down? It sounds like fun.