Date: Jan 05, 2020 9:04 pm Title: Chapter 21
wow, great story, fantastic
Date: Jan 05, 2020 6:07 pm Title: Chapter 3
darn selfish Lindey
Date: Aug 24, 2016 3:21 am Title: Chapter 21
Excellent story. I loved the way you integrated canon into all parts of the story. I especially like that Justin remembered the prom.
Date: Aug 19, 2016 11:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Hiya,
Read this story in one go.
Girl, you wrote one heck of a thriller! The final chapters were an absolute nailbiter!
Amazingly written, an emotional and thrilling story to read. I could feel Justin's pain and anguish. Loved the way Brian kept by his side.
This one goes on my fave list.
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: Aug 16, 2016 4:08 pm Title: Chapter 21
LOVE LOVE LOVE the ending!!!!
Author's Response:
Awww thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! :)
Date: Aug 16, 2016 3:53 pm Title: Chapter 20
Reichert is SUCH an ass.. so glad for the sentence!
Author's Response:
Haha he is! I'm glad that point got across. Though given hor horrible he is it wasn't hard. ;)
Date: Aug 16, 2016 3:41 pm Title: Chapter 19
My heart smiled at Brian bringing Justin to dance again... even only in the loft, it was just so sweet
Author's Response:
Right? Just a sweet, tender moment for them to get over all the horrible stuff that happened.
Date: Aug 16, 2016 3:31 pm Title: Chapter 18
I'm so glad Sunshine is back!
Author's Response:
Finally, right?! He's on the up and up. ;)
Date: Aug 16, 2016 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 17
Debbie and Carl are so cute!!!!
Author's Response:
I thought so too! :) I loved adding them in here.
Date: Aug 16, 2016 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 16
from a writing standpoint... fantastic chapter ending
from a reading standpoint... AWFUL cliff hanger chapter ending...
i'm so torn lol
Author's Response:
Hahaha thanks! :) I almost didn't do it, because I hate cliff-hangers myself, but then I thought it would be so juicy and fun! At least you had the next chapter waiting for you.
Date: Aug 16, 2016 3:00 pm Title: Chapter 15
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Haha thanks! :)
Date: Aug 16, 2016 2:51 pm Title: Chapter 14
Go Carl Go...
Author's Response:
At least someone knows Justin needs help, right?
Date: Aug 16, 2016 2:45 pm Title: Chapter 13
oh no justin... what are you starting???? :(
Author's Response:
He's getting himself into trouble...Silly little twat. ;)
Date: Aug 16, 2016 2:36 pm Title: Chapter 12
I'm literally biting my nails reading this... soo good
Author's Response:
AWESOME! I'm so glad!
Date: Aug 16, 2016 2:28 pm Title: Chapter 11
except this is where the scary will really start when we know who the "two guys" are... our newly retired police!!! :(
Author's Response:
Unfortunately yes, things will start getting more intense! Thanks!
Date: Aug 16, 2016 2:20 pm Title: Chapter 10
I just love how you are weaving all our characters into the story that is obviously not canon, but it works :)
Author's Response:
Oh yay! I'm so glad you think so!
Date: Aug 16, 2016 2:11 pm Title: Chapter 9
C'mon Brian... figure something out
and I'm so happy Justin drew something...even for this purpose, it might end up helping him in the long run
Poor Jason
Author's Response:
Yeah he's pretty determined, which will help get things rolling. Even if he can't leave the loft he own't let them get away.
Date: Aug 16, 2016 2:02 pm Title: Chapter 8
I don't like Alex in this chapter at all... didn't even consider Justin was telling the truth!
Author's Response:
I know, but in his defense he is looking at it only from a professional point of view. Maybe he'll come around. ;)
Date: Aug 16, 2016 1:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh no... I can't even tell if it was on purpose, or if they seriously just didn't pay attention enough
Author's Response:
Either way, it's pretty terrible right? But things are just starting to get interesting. ;)
Date: Aug 16, 2016 1:37 pm Title: Chapter 6
so at least I was right about it being Jason Kemp... good way of working our canon storylines into this world in a way...
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was hoping it would make it flow better to add some canon stuff in there.
Date: Aug 16, 2016 1:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
In my mind I keep pictureing "Dumpster Boy" being the new Hustler we meet in each chapter... makes me so sad :(
Author's Response:
Well you guessed right! :) But yes...we all knows what happens with him...
Date: Aug 16, 2016 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
Brian should have gotten them both binoculars lol
Author's Response:
That would have been good so they didn't have to share! But oh well haha
Date: Aug 16, 2016 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
Seriously, did the girls not even THINK to call like Brian asked???? ugh
Author's Response:
They can be a bit air-headed. In their defense, they're used to being able to just walk in. But in this situation it's pretty bad. :(
Date: Aug 16, 2016 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
I wish Justin would allow others, especially Em to visit... I think it would help both of them... poor guys
Author's Response:
Well to be honest Emmett and Ted arne't really in the story. I'm not very good at balancing a lot of characters yet and it's something i need to work on. So for now I'm just focusing on Brian and Justin. :) But they'll still have the support they need.
Date: Aug 16, 2016 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww, Poor Justin.
I feel bad for both Justin and Brian
Author's Response:
This story is going to be rough for both of them. But they'll have each other. :)