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Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2019 8:10 am Title: Chapter 173: Justin disappears from hospital/Justin as a recluse

This would make a great story.  Wish someone would write it.  Right now hardly anyone is writing anything so this would be wonderful.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2019 4:48 am Title: Chapter 173: Justin disappears from hospital/Justin as a recluse

Oh goody!!!  First to comment...  Can I say... F**king Michael?!? (This would be a good one shot.)

Combining the two... Does Justin recognize Brian as the man from the parachute? And if I can add to this... maybe Justin is a world famous artist that paints under a pseudonym, and doesn't attend any art exhibits.

Either way... did Michael escape unscathed by Brian?  Didn't think so...

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2019 8:58 pm Title: Chapter 172: What if there was a mistake at the clinic?

Now this would make a fantastic story.  Hope someone decides to write it.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2019 2:58 am Title: Chapter 171: What if they all drove taxis?

This would be great.  So many options for a plot.  Wish I were a writer.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2019 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 170: Did he do it?

Could be a good mystery as long as Justin is innocent !!!!

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2019 12:19 am Title: Chapter 165 - Slight variation to the sperm bank bunny...

 Nice  bunny! 

You could also add that Lindsey was in a sharing mode unbeknowns to Brian or Mel.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2019 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 165 - Slight variation to the sperm bank bunny...

That would be a good story. 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2019 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 165 - Slight variation to the sperm bank bunny...

That would be a good story. 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2019 1:22 pm Title: Chapter 23 Debbie learns that Michael has been leading on a young woman at work

I do not like this

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2019 9:06 pm Title: Chapter 164: Someone is selling my what?!

Why do I have the idea that this would make a good MPREG fic? I think it was a tv show or article I saw once where a man was meeting his 37 children for the first time. Brian would probably faint dead away! LOL

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2019 2:42 pm Title: Chapter 164: Someone is selling my what?!

Hmmm.... Is this a different take on MPREG?  I just posted a different take on MPreg. Because if it's a porn site, I can't see women visiting it.  This could be really hilarious, though.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2019 3:13 am Title: Chapter 164: Someone is selling my what?!

Oh this would be a good story.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2019 8:20 am Title: Chapter 163: Justin owns Britin Airways...

I could go for a really good AU, and this sounds good. The author could go many directions with this one. Most of all, I would love to see what they came up with as the 'who' and 'why.'

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2019 4:32 am Title: Chapter 162: Another slight twist to the loft robbery

LOL! Hi, BritonManor! I've had this one running through my head for a few weeks now and finally decided to post it hoping one of you wonderful writers would snatch it up since it just wouldn't let go! I like what you've suggested about Craig and Hobbs and especially that you've added in the Mpreg aspect! Looking forward to reading it!

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2019 4:28 am Title: Chapter 162: Another slight twist to the loft robbery

It's very interesting that you came up with a burglary plot, as I'm currently writing one. I have the story completely outlined and haven't written much more than the prologue. Of course, Michael and Lindsay are behind it. I wonder if I can change gears? So after ten minutes of contemplation, how's this?

Being it's Molly's birthday, and Craig is certain Justin will show up, sets the plan in motion. Then he contacts Hobbs, who kidnaps Justin. What neither man is aware of - maybe not even Brian yet - or better yet, he is - is that they just found out from the doctor that Justin pregnancy is considered - high risk.

What do you think? And the big question - can I write that? I certainly will give it a shot.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2019 1:58 am Title: Chapter 161: Coach Kinney/Dr. Kinney/Craig’s ghost/Mel’s pregnancy…

You got winners again Deb. #3- Craig haunting - kind of gives me the shivers, though. He's such a unlikeable homophobe. Oh, but wait, Idea Struck... Would serve the so-and-so right, if he had to observe Brian and Justin in the bedroom. :)

#4 - could also result in JR suffering lifelong effects such as cerebral palsy, mental retardation, visual and hearing impairments, and poor health and growth.

But, ABSOLUTELY LOVE 1 and 2. I much as I love Canon Divergent, I also LOVE really good AU's. And these sound like winners in my book.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2019 1:44 am Title: Chapter 160: Escort servce

Huh! Unfortunately, I must have 'forgotten' the word 'legal'.  Then the question would be 'is that mandatory'? So, IF Justin is hired, well, we wouldn't want hm to go there, right? Just Saying. ;)

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2019 7:21 am Title: Chapter 160: Escort servce

Hi, BritinManor! No under the table deals needed since prostitution is legal! LOL! I figured it would be interesting to see how authors might handle Brian running a legal bordello! Then he's challenged with whether or not to hire Justin or keep him for himself! :P

Deb

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2019 7:07 am Title: Chapter 160: Escort servce

Ooh la la! This could prove interesting. I'm taking for granted the escort service doesn't provide bedroom detail, unless the escort makes a special deal with the gentleman under the table?

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2019 9:17 am Title: Chapter 159: Justin goes missing in London...

Fantastic idea.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2019 7:53 am Title: Chapter 159: Justin goes missing in London...

Hey, BritinManor! I'm glad you liked it! I do love a mystery myself and really hope that someone writes this.

As for suggestions about an author... TAG is really good at mysteries. Wonder what it would take to convince her to take on one more story?

Deb

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2019 7:13 am Title: Chapter 159: Justin goes missing in London...

OOOOHHHH!  It was sounding good like a reunion meeting and a "Let's start a relationship" type thing.  THEN - you continued with the he's missing and the lone business card and I was HOOKED!!!!  I thoroughly LOVE mysteries and suspence. THIS has both.

I know I have said before, that I wish someone would write this, but by gosh, this one I MEAN IT!!!!! I can picture scenarios in my head already. I'm trying to think of a good mystery writer that we have, that would be perfect for this. Any suggestions???

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2018 8:58 am Title: Chapter 158: Justin died too soon...

Once again, Deb, you've hit a winner in my book. I can see evilness lurking in the shadows already. dun dun dun duuuuun. *smirks*

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 30, 2018 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 158: Justin died too soon...

Oh, this would be great.  Hope someone decides to write it.

Reviewer: loahisi Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2018 5:42 am Title: Chapter 157: Love Potion

That's exactly what I'm saying, I think it was inspired by the movie because it's called "love potion #9"

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