Date: Sep 26, 2018 12:28 am Title: Chapter 138: Mel fakes a miscarriage...
Thanks, bjluv! In response to your puzzlement about Lindsay: Sam is a womanizer. He would probably only keep Lindsay around for a few months before finding someone else. I think Lindsay would expect Mel to be waiting for her because 1) Lindsay would believe no one else would want to take up with a woman who is pregnant, 2) She believes that Mel can't really live without her, 3) if she discovers Mel isn't happy she's back then Lindsay will do whatever she has to do to win Mel back since Lindsay thinks the baby Mel is carrying is Brian's.
I haven't decided if I want to try my hand at writing this; it feels like a long multi-chapter fic to me and I'm much better suited to short fics.
I'm glad you enjoy the fics I have posted and thanks for all the reviews.
I hope, like you, that a few authors will snatch it up!
*Hugs*
Deb
Date: Sep 26, 2018 12:16 am Title: Chapter 138: Mel fakes a miscarriage...
Oh Deb! You have the most amazing ideas for stories. This sounds oh-so-very-good! I can just imagine all the scenarios this could cause. Does Mel come back, or do Brian and Justin have to go get them? Are they really in Florida? One thing that has me puzzled is, why would Lindsay expect Mel would be waiting for her return, when she left to pursue a life with Sam? Also, how do Brian and Justin deal with the idea of how that sperm sample was able to be used?
Really hoping someone picks this up. I have author choices in my mind, so I hope they hear my silent plea. You Deb, should try some of your wonderful ideas yourself, as you are a gifted author, too.