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Date: Sep 29, 2018 4:41 pm Title: Chapter 139: Expanding on bunny I previously posted…

Hey Deb!  This sounds great!  I like the new concept you came up with. I originally liked the idea, as you can see, but your expansion far outweighs the scenarios I came up with. The question is, How does it come about that Brian learns the truth? Did Lindsay leave the 'Father's Name' blank on the birth certificate? Does Mel know the truth? If not, what's her reaction when she learns of her wife's deception?  This would be an awesome read writers!