Date: Apr 07, 2020 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This
great story
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Deb
[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2019 1:19 pm Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This
Forgot about the 3 way phone convos.
Author's Response:
LOL! Yeah those were always fun to watch.
Deb
Date: Aug 30, 2018 5:44 am Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This
Very good story... I'm glad you wrote one of your own Plot Bunnies. I read another story where Michel had hired a hooker who looked like Brian, and they were meeting up at the loft when Brian was out-of-town, and on Wednesday mornings, when Kinnetik had their standard weekly meeting. Brian arranged video cameras in the loft to catch Michael. Anyway, is there anyway to find out if an author has written a Plot Bunny story? For your #5 Bunny, NoChaser made a comment that she wrote stories for #2 and #13... I looked through her stories, but couldn't figure out which ones they were. I wrote her a personal message, but received no response...
Thanks much, Cathy
Author's Response:
Thanks, Cathy! I'm glad you liked this. I have written a few of my bunnies, this one, The Less the Merrier, Surprise and a couple others as well. Sometimes it just takes me a while to figure out how I can work a bunny into a fic. But I really enjoy reading other's fics based on bunnies I've posted.
I read the one you mentioned, too, and really enjoyed it. I can't think of the name of it right now.
Not all the plot bunnies are mine. The ones that NoChaser commented on are from another member. Usually the author will mention in the Story Notes section or Summary that the fic is based on a plot bunny from (insert name here). I don't think I've read all of NoChaser's fics yet but there is a good chance that the ones mentioned are within a story or maybe the stories just haven't been posted yet.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Deb
Date: Feb 05, 2018 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This
At last, Michael seeks help....good story. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Deb
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2018 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 1: Some Times Things End
Jeeze....I really do hope that the Brian and Mikey show is finally over. Way to go Justin. No matter what, Michael did say that and he deserved a smackdown.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, Mikey was definitely due a smackdown and it was time Justin gave it to him! Thank you for the review!
Deb
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2017 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This
I must have read this story half a dozen times already- truly a little piece of perfection... that punch and everyone’s reactions was so satisfying :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I found it very satisfying when writing it! LOL! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Deb
Date: Oct 13, 2017 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This
Finally Michaels true colors are seen by all. His selfish mindset out in the open. But I’m not sure the counseling will work ... will see
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I always hoped that the true personality of Michael would be seen by the others in the series, but alas that didn't happen. At least we can do so in our fics. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Deb
Date: Aug 25, 2016 3:38 am Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This
I love this story. Well I like all of your stories, but this one made me cringe and laugh at the same time.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it and all my stories and that you could laugh and cringe at the same time! :)
Thanks for the review!
Deb
Date: Aug 22, 2016 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This
Deb didn't take too much time to see her son was at fault.
I would have had the same reaction as Justin and Brian: I couldn't be able to go back where Michael has spent too much time naked and doing what very few people would want to imagine. Eww...
Emmett is really great in this story.
Author's Response:
I think it would have taken Deb a lot longer to believe Michael was at fault if it hadn't been for Emmett and Ted confirming what happened.
I know I wouldn't be able to go back in either! To be honest, every time they showed Michael naked on the show I closed my eyes!
I always loved Emmett and felt he was actually a very strong person; one who would stand up not only for himself but for others as well. Michael never really did that unless he was going to benefit in some way.
Thanks for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Deb
Date: Aug 22, 2016 7:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: Some Times Things End
Fortunately, Emmett and Ted were there, otherwise, I don't know how it will have ended.
Michael is out of his mind (yes, I'm assuming he has one) and he isn't able to take his responsibilities; he has to attack Justin, as if all that happened was absolutely normal.
So glad Emmett isn't sympathetic towards Michael.
Poor Brice, why did he fell for this guy?
Author's Response:
I wanted Emmett and Ted there as witnesses because as we all know, most of them would believe Michael over Brian in most situations. With Emmett and Ted being there it left Michael with no one to spin his lies on.
I don't think Emmett could ever be sympathetic towards Michael after the comments he made to Justin. And I honestly believe that a lot of the sympathy Michael received from Ted and Emmett mostely came from lies that Michael told.
Brice was just gullible and fell for the puppy dog eyes! :)
Thanks for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Deb
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2016 1:30 am Title: Chapter 1: Some Times Things End
What a way to end a friendship and destroy a marriage Michael is such an idiot that in no way can you feel sorry for him.
He knew if Brian ever found out he was using the loft for his tryst that Brian would not forgive him and still he did it because in his small little mind he believed that Brian would forgive him.
You can't forgive someone who goes behind your back and devils your home just because he can't get over his childhood crush.
This was such a Brilliant story and I know I will enjoy reading it again cause I love when Justin hits Michael makes me giggle.;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, Mikey was trying to live his dream life with his imitation Brian in real Brian's home! That is definitely something Brian would never forgive him for doing.
*I love when Justin hits Michael makes me giggle.;)* Me too!! ;)
Thanks for the review!
Deb
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2016 3:48 pm Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This
I am so glad that Emmett knew better then to try and excuse Mikey. You gave us a perfect ending. If you ever want to expand your epilogue I'd certainly enjoy reading it.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I figured once Emmett and Ted saw Michael's manipulations in the works that neither of them would defend Michael. I always believed a lot of their impressions of Brian came from Michael's comments and manipulations at playing the best friend martyr.
*You gave us a perfect ending.* Another wonderful compliment! Thank you!
Again, I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the great review!
Deb
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2016 3:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: Some Times Things End
First you write the best bunnies ideas. This one was no exception. Mikey trying to blame Justin for everything takes the cake. This story also contains another bunny of yours. We get Justin hitting Mikey and everyone finding out that Mikey wished Justin had died. Maybe the reason for Brian hitting Mikey is finally coming to light. On to the next chapter and finding out how Ben feels about finding this out.
Author's Response:
*First you write the best bunnies ideas. This one was no exception.* Thank you! That is such a great compliment.
I think Michael believed that Justin intentionally interferred with his relationship with Brian. He always flip-flopped between telling Justin that Brian loved him and then saying Brian only kept Justin around because he felt guilty that Justin was bashed. I wouldn't go so far as to say that Mikey really wished Justin had died in the parking garage, just that Brian hadn't stuck around and become involved. And yeah... I just couldn't resist having Justin punch Mikey. ;)
I'm glad you're enjoying this and continue to enjoy it; and thank you for the review!
Deb
Date: Aug 21, 2016 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 2: Let's Finish This
This was good... I wish it had been a bit longer... but I still enjoyed it quite a bit :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Deb
Date: Aug 21, 2016 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 1: Some Times Things End
stupid stupid Mikey... his actions were horrible, but I never thought he'd repeat those words about the bashing!
Author's Response:
I agree Michael's actions were horrible but I also believe that a very small part of Michael truly wished that Brian had left Justin lying in that parking garage. I don't believe he actually wanted Justin to die there, just that Brian not be involved because Michael truly thought Brian kept Justin around out of quilt.
Thanks for the review!
Deb