Thank you so much for the birthday wishes, and for putting me in the story that was very sweet.

Great chapter

~Lorie

Poor Michael, no manners, no brain, no charm, no clue. He was lucky to have a best friend and he over used it. Justin is so humble and kind with the kids. Gus and Brian will find soon enough what an asset he can be for them. Same for Jackson who will, with his mind, do what nobody will expect him to.

So happy Brian told Michael loudly and clearly that he is no more his friend. Will it be sufficient? One can dream.

Happy birthday to Lorie and thank you for helping on this story (and all the previous).

"You think you can handlie it?" Sorry.that line along cracked me up. All I saw in my head was one of those candy gummy worms. haha.

Aaaaaaaaaaanyway. AWESOME chapter! Really glad that Brian was able to give michael what-for. I highly doubt it will do any good. for some reason, Michael seem to have an over inflated sense of self. I don't get it. How can he possibly? does Monty and eli influence them that much? Has he simply always been resentful of his "station" in life? That he grew up poor, so now he deserves everythign handed to him. "awwwwwwww poor widdle Mikey" and to treat his mother like he does. He needs to be hung by his little marble sized balls. the fact he seems to belileve that Brian "owes" him....ARG!!! He pisses me off! If this is the way he's always acted, it's no wonder Ben has strayed so much and ahs to attitude he does. Not that I condine it, and I have the feeling he's going to get worse before he ever gets better...........I'll wait and see.

The confrontation at the school was priceless. Nothing like getting shot down by a kid. Sad that he was such an ass in front of so many kids, but in a way good too. Perhaps a restraining order is possible as there were so many witnesses to his behavior.

Really hopng Brian can buy Michael's house. Deb's too for that matter. that way it stays safe and he can just pass it over to her. Michael's house however....Leave it as a milstone around Michael's neck. I want him to suffer unlimitedly! 

curious how Lindsey is going to interfere here. What she's going to do or try to do. What kind of devious plots will she get up to. She's manipulative and devious. Michael is just an asshole and doesn't have the brain power to really devise anything overly manipulative I don't think. You may surprise me, but thinking of Michael as really smart enough to come up with a brilliant plot........really not realistic. lol. Lindsey is smart and Waspy. can be a dangerous combination.

really looking forward to what you have up your sleeve with this!!

cheers,

Elaine

OMG!!!!!! What an AWESOME chapter!! First, what a touching tribute to Lorie! She is a VERY special lady!! Thank you for making her night!!

As for this chapter: WOW!! So much to comment on. I LOVE how you put so much content within the chapters themselves that my brain goes into overdrive just to process the emotions I feel while reading them! 

Michael.... what an ASSSSSHHHHOLE First he eavesdrops- JEALOUS much?? Then he basically goes to the school and makes an even bigger ASS of himself by confronting Justin in front of 8-12 year olds. Let me think....STUPID much, Michael? I think so!! I loved the way Justin handled the whole contretempts with the idiot and then to have Jackson stand there and basically call him an ungrateful ingrate was just priceless. But then here comes Gus with the clincher!! The way the events were set up it was like watching a rat in a maze trying to find his way out- Interesting in the extreme and funny as hell!! I guess the fact that he actually thought that Jackson was Gus the first time he saw him was completely lost on the fool! HA! Classic!

Then the STALKER (because what else could you possible call his desperate ass) shows up at Kinnetik to further his foray into fuckery!! I'm so happy that Brian told him off. I cannot and WILL NOT deny giving a standing ovation to Brian when he let Michael have it with both barrels and a rope!! Let that mofo hang! I sincerely hope that Brian IS able to buy Michael's house as well as Debbie's. Michael doesn't need to be brought down off his mighty high horse... he needs to be DROPKICKED!! 

WHOO-WEE I can't wait for more of this! 

WRITE On, Star!

~Nichelle