Date: Aug 03, 2017 2:22 am Title: Chapter 9
yes- Brian and Justing kissing on the field- while I don't really like MPREG- I 'm okay with the story- it doesn't revolve around the pregnancy etc- Justin has a kid- Brian has a kid and they share a kid- cool
Date: May 24, 2017 7:43 am Title: Chapter 9
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Date: Jan 09, 2017 5:13 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wohoo. That is going to be one long hot night.
Date: Sep 02, 2016 8:44 pm Title: Chapter 9
This end... Poor Justin, so horny and no time to have his needs met. The night is going to be shaky, noisy and sweaty... Can't wait for that!
So much happened here:
- I loved how Deb ignored Lindsey'
- Justin found out that his family has expanded
- Michael let Lindsey know about Jackson
- Lindsey met JJ/Justin and asked about the famous Cole and his son
- Brian made his point regarding Justin both for him and Lindsey: for the first, it's "I can't wait until we are alone" and for her it's "don't you see I'm busy with this hot guy?"
Date: Aug 30, 2016 4:02 am Title: Chapter 9
Way to go, Deb! She knows what Lindsay’s up to.
Lindsay and Michael are both so slimy! Ugh!
Awww! I love that Alex wants to get to know Justin! He seems like such a sweetheart. Justin sure is having one hell of a day! :)
Love that Justin and Brian both handled Lindsay with finesse.
Uh-oh! A very horny Justin waiting at home! Look out, Brian! :)
Deb
Date: Aug 27, 2016 9:58 am Title: Chapter 9
I am loving this story. Michael and Lindsey are pathetic. I hate that Ben is involved too. He was always one of my favorite characters but I'm definitley on this journey with you.
Can't wait for some Britin loving!
Date: Aug 26, 2016 4:00 am Title: Chapter 9
OMFG!!!!! This chapter was AMAZING! I'm so happy that Deb saw clear through Lindsay's attempt at manipulation! That shows growth since she has now realized that just because one had a baby, doesn't mean they're a real Mother....well Lindsay is but she's the kind with an extremely strong expletive behind it.
As far as Michael goes: Well I can't say that I am surprised that he will continue to try to 'help' Brian even though he has been told in no uncertain terms that Brian does NOT want to bother with the likes of him. Now he has told Lindsay that Brian has another son which means true mayhem is about to ensue. <in my announcer from the American Gladiators voice> Restraining orders readyyyyy? Can of Whoop Ass readyyyyy? SET IT OFF!!!
So Justin has a little brother, eh? I think provided that the mother is as open-minded as Jennifer, that could be a relationship worth building if she leaves Cunty Craig. I wonder if Craig knows just how successful Justin is and that his plan to humiliate Justin didn't work? That is a confrontation waiting to happen but not before all the others are in full swing, I suppose.
Which brings me to the Justin- Brian- Lindsay triangle! MY OH MY when Lindsay finds out that Cole and JJ are the same people as Justin Taylor, she is going to really flip out especially considering his parting shot to her. Both of their comments to her were CLASSIC and had me chuckling for real. I couldn't even fathom how she was calling Brian a whore when she's the one offering her box to anyone with or without something swinging between their legs. If ever there was a skanky skeezer it is Lindsay! Brian and Justin's kiss set my eyeballs on FIRE just reading that! I'm glad they are both of a mind to put the boys to bed and finish what was started 8 years prior. That said, I know they have an uphill battle and nothing worth having comes easy especially with the folks who will make trouble- or try to at any rate. It will be interesting to watch how they handle all of that while getting to know each other past the physical connection.
Looking forward to much more of this!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Poor Lorie, this story has so much I have to write, she’ll never see the end. Thank you for all the encouragement.
[Report This]Date: Aug 26, 2016 2:45 am Title: Chapter 9
My, my, my. Lindsay actually thought she could get Deb on her side. Mikey tried to get Lindsay to help him, but all the talk about Cole or Justin Taylor has her confused. But what's new. Interesting to learn that Craig had another son, who also goes to St. James. Alex sounds like a good guy. He makes an excellant addition to this story.
Author's Response:
I usually leave Craig out but it was time to mess with him.
Date: Aug 26, 2016 2:17 am Title: Chapter 9
You need to post the next chapter immediately!
Author's Response:
Done, thank you for reading.